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Her mercy to His penitence
4.65 (31 เรตติ้ง)
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"Don’t do it love! Please. Am sorry I hurt you. How can I live without you? Forgive me. "
The girl stood at the cross road. Tears streamed down her pale cheek as she debated between listening to his pleas or to her heart. She was tired and could no longer take any of it. He took everything from her yet she stayed until she felt that her soul was no longer alive.
Each pain he caused chipped a little at her soul until there was nothing left to give. She was now an empty soul that was hanging on a thin thread. She was only breathing, but being alive never counted as living. It was time to let go.
She closed her eyes and run in to the middle of the road. A loud screech was heard as her blood painted the black tarmac red.
Nooo…..
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NOTE: This work is on-going and not yet edited.
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this is the first book I read where the abusive ml did not get the fl BUT if u make the book to end to that, this book have lost its uniqueness
I love how the story from the beginning was suspense filled... Jasmine is a strong lady...your story is a whispering encouragement to people having a tough time "pick your dreams back up*
The title right up from the start was intriguing. And let me say, every chapter written never failed to amuse me. It was very well written, words and events happening on the story was well described as well. Though a few touch ups from here and there but over all, the book shows potential![img=recommend]
I read only a few chapters and that was enough for me to fall in love with this novel. It is interesting, wonderful and beautifully written novel. I can see how much effort the writer put into this lovely novel.
i like this story very much as it has something i want in every book that is strong girl but i hope that end up with someone whio deserve her
I really really enjoy this book! It's different in that the FL and original ML do NOT get back together! The family interactions are so cute and heart warming. I'd like more stories like this!
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I love this book❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
A good sample of Contemporary Romance. There are some minor grammar failures but writing an emotional story like this in English is the hardest one. Congratulations to the author.
A work of art. The graphic descriptions used by the author made this work picturesque. Very vivid. We were given a heads up about the work, even though it's already good. When it's retouched it'll be a thousand times better. Good job author.
I LOVE THE TITLE! This is such a captivating story. Each chapter makes you want to read more. The quality is excellent and the words flow beautifully. Credits to the author for having such a natural talent for writing. Highly recommended [img=recommend]
A beautiful and powerful beginning. One of the things I liked about it is that the synopsis carried the plot and the author owned it well. Beautiful Introduction to our protagonists and a tremendous job on the overall available chapters.
Wow, this is amazing. The author really know how to draw a reader in the novel with her words. The description of scenes, characters, events and emotions are so beautifully crafted that it keeps one hook. Every turning page just keeps you wanting for more. Good job author.
This book is wonderful, the descriptive writing makes it njoyable to read and imagine, the characters are well defined, (I want big brothers in my life too =_="), the plot is nicely written. Good job author.
This story if full of feelings... and you really want to know how Jasmine will actually find the strength to face the man who harassed her until she wanted to die. I loved it.
How should I describe this? When I read the first chapter, I could felt the character's emotion . Her despairs and her cries touched me deeply. You can imagined the hard life she had going through. The story is intriguing. I recommended this book. Good job, author.
The description is on point. I have to say that the synopsis really pulled me in. I haven't regretted what I've read so far. The writer has a unique way of drawing you in a with her words. So much that I feel the female lead's pain. 👍
Hello Humeyra! I've read the 1st Chapter and two thumbs up for you![img=recommend] It was such a good opening for the story, the first part was quite heavy of course because it was about suicide but as the narration goes it became lighter and warmer. The story was intriguing, because imagining how Jasmine was living her life in the present versus imagining how she used to be in the past was a total opposite sides. I love the way you narrate your story, the flow of your narration was smooth and easy to understand. And as what you have said, this story was not yet edited so it's understandable that some sentence didn't start with a capital letters. all in all it was a great chapter to start the story and to catch the attention of the readers. Keep up the good work! Looking forward for the next chapters.
Hello my dearest readers and viewers. Author over here shamelessly giving myself a five star. This book was inspired by a close friend's university experience with her first love. it's got a mix of romance, regret, betrayal and simply learning to live after a terrible experience. Whenever I hear someone say that they dont believe in real love, i feel that those words come from deep inside. Either the person had an ugly experience or someone close to them had something similar. Love is a beautiful thing but the most beautiful version of love is loving oneself before loving another. your reviews, comments and votes are my motivation. Help me through this journey by your gracious encouragement. Thank you in advance and hope you will enjoy this book.