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Help I’m the captain of the dreadnought
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How would you feel if you were transported to your favorite game?
This is what happened to Fritz. Him and Millions of other players are transported in the popular mmorpg Into the unknown, a open world in space, Fritz has been grinding for years and has achieved the most powerful ship in the game, the dreadnaught. Read as he summons many women, for either guidance or for pleasure.
Will he lead his ship towards riches or will he be floating in space for all eternity?
The book will be going through a re-write so please don’t jump to conclusions
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If you have poor grammar in the synopsis then that is a auto nope for me. Try fixing that first then maybe others would be more inclined to try your story
... Disappointing... When I select a story about a guy suddenly becoming the captain of a dreadnought class starship, and that there isn’t any description about said dreadnought after 8 chapters, then there is a problem. In fact, the only things with a minimum of description are the fanservice/slut girls. Even the enemy captain and the enemy ship are more described than the protagonist and his ship. Little has been revealed about the world, or his starting location in the world. Nothing about travel locations and travel time. -This is no longer a game- Dude proceed to kill a whole bunch of people as if they were players avatars or npc. ... ... Things are no longer a game!! It’s the deadly reality!! The reaction to this fact is very disappointing. Don’t you know Sword Art Online or Log Horizon? Or Overlord? Why are these former npcs so thirsty about him? Where did that thing about always noticing the stalker come from?