Heaven's Flame

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Sunus_Writes

It's Sunus here, and this is just an author's review of his work. If you have any doubts towards my work or any theme of confusion you might be wondering about, feel free to comment below❤️.

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Crimson_Cloud

You are here to check out reviews, well I assure you, it's a beautiful story. The thrilling part of stories that are not the usual tropes is that you can't really tell where the story is heading the specifics of the story, and this book here has it all. Superb job author ❤️

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Mary_Onaduja

This book is awesome. Love the way it's going and I can't wait to read more chapters. The fact that it has a lot of description makes the story much more east to read.

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Crimson_Colour

Superb read. Enjoying the strength of the female character and her string will to defy the odds of the ruler of her realm. Awesome job author...

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bitterlouise

The story is great, even though the chapters are long, it will leave you wanting for more. Although there times that words or sentences are a bit confusing, using context clues, you can still understand it somehow. Good job🧡

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Sneakycat098

Amazing story with fantastic world building. There are so many things in this fantasy world that it really made me stick to the novel continuously. The only thing which I found pointing out was that the author needs to increase the vocabulary. Whenever I read the sentences it cuts so abruptly that I need to re read again this disrupting my flow. On the other hand, everything has been described so precisely that you can see the effort author put in this novel. There was a minor issue, which I've already mentioned in the comment. I wish author best of luck for his work☺️

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Scorpious_star

Okay so after reading the story I have come to this that the plot is very well adapted to. The characters are nicely written tho some of them are hard to understand as their emotions are not clear. All in all good work Author

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Surbhi_mithil

The writing style is appeasing with the pace and paragraph. This story is so good you will love it while reading chapters all the characters are awesome and world building are super .Great work author

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DaoistxYTRJ0

Nicely written, fast-paced story. I was invested in Adriana's life from the start. even the introduction of Anlai was good. Hope to read more of it. good going author.

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binni_seon

An intense story line with strong characters is ably assisted by the quality writing..a great read..looking forward for more and more...keep updating

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safa_bukhari

The story can make anyone addictive Keep up the good work! The main characters have good development. Hope to see more from the chapters, waiting how they end up.

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Zherie17

So far, it is an intriguing story but I had to stop because of those long paragraphs that can be divided into two. Grammar and punctuation symbols are often misplaced/lacking as well. Best of luck to you, Author.

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Loctovia

Strong FLs are just my cup of tea and this one here is awesome. The story unfolds nicely and the plot is good as well. Good job on this author!

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RomanceFanatic028

First of all let me tell you. The Mc is OP. I really love to read about strong FML that's why enjoyed each and every chapters. The action sequence is mind blowing. I would love to keep reading. Keep up the good work author. [img=update][img=update]

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ThePotatoKing

This is amazing, the action and tension feels more like a male lead novel though this has a female lead. I like strong characters and that's why I think that the MC is really awesome. The Story is intense, and keeps on getting better with each new chapter!

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Crimson_Colour

Heaven's Flame? I actually didn't think the book would go this far but I'm actually enjoying the book. Adriana with her string features and the maniacal Anlai giving a hot pursuit.❤️❤️❤️

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Jude_K_1656

I find this creation interesting to read, with a great scenarios for every chapters. You can love the FL's character, a fighter one which makes the story runs quite well. In the traditional world of publishing, narration always in the past tense and the dialogue in the present tense, plus you need some proofreading and add appropriate punctuation marks, though I could say that it never affect the interest of the story. A great read for everybody

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FavourEkele_1969

I admired your story telling, it's unique and detailed, the world building is solid as the setting was described excellently. There's no pressure while reading, except the buildup ofc🤭 and good work [img=update][img=recommend]

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Excelsior_x

Great world building. The story line is well written that it matures like fine wine as you read the next chapter lol. The author knows how to present her vision in words and that helps you see the world through their eyes. The characters are relatable. The grammar is quite good, the only issue I might have is that the paragraphs are bulky but the way the story is told it does not take anything away from it. A good read

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loti_apathae

Nice! Hope there's more to come. .............................................................................................................................