Haruhi's pregnant with the 'shadow kings' child

The story is filled with plot twists. I did not expect Mori to fall in love with Haruhi. But, I feel like you're describing too much. For example, The audience didnt need to know that Haruhi was eating a banana because it held no relevance to the story at all. We also didn't need to know that Haruhi was going to the park because nothing happened there besides her going to sleep and waking up.

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