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Harry Potter and The Loa's Child
4.4 (75 เรตติ้ง)
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This Fan-Fiction is a little different. The MC will not know of the Harry Potter stories, And through his eyes we will be able to see the darker side of the Harry Potter Universe.
This is a crossover fan-fic.
Harry Potter, The Originals, and The vampire Diaries
So, Follow Lucien Dubois as he creates his own destiny in a new world while trying to figure just what kind of man he would like to be.
I do not own harry potter, The Vampire Diaries, or The Originals
I do not own the cover photo
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Grammar is ok but there are some fück ups, story is about loa and voodoo stuff. (I have no idea what this stuff is) Although I do not know much about these things I'm learning about it. This is my 3rd favourite Harry Potter Fan-Fiction. Over all good story with a dash of Voodoo things.
Writers said Mc wouldn't be OP at the beginning and it will take times like normal people.. It took less than 20 chapters. The MC is so annoying, the slang is horrible and the grammar is even worst. English is my second language and even I can't take it anymore. Author trade fast pace chapters for horrible grammar. It is a perfect example of quantity instead of quality. Characters are making weird choices and Mc is just a ruthless *****, not thinking about the repercussion of his action (not that it matters because yeah..plot armor and stuff). All in all it is just a teenager on a Power trip making the world his *****. I feel no attachment for him. I feel like the author should just stop for a while. Go back to the beginning, proofread his work and refine his story. It is not all bad but the bad outweigh the good by a mile.
It's a pretty good fanfiction. I like how it's going where in general. Give it a try if you have read more than one other fanfiction on this website.
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Incredibly interesting take on the world of Harry Potter. It also ties into The Originals. Definitely a good read. Also, Mc is Chaotic Neutral. He does not mind doing good deeds, but he is mostly interested in what is best for him and will do what is best for him by any means. This includes crime and dark magic. Definitely does not follow Harry Potter plot.
the novel is very good, as compared to many fanfics which follow original script this one builds the world further and is more creative __________________________________________________________________
It was a good and interesting story... Though I can say that he change many scenes and Hermione change... I think this story will do a great things if it was been read carefully... You will notice many things that doesn't include in the original book of Harry Potter...
Eh? This is good novel! ......................................................................................... Though i really don't know about Voodoo ......................................................................................... .........................................................................................
kinda confusing at times could be way better the author needs an editor but he might have gotten one by now since I'm only on like chapter 40 so yea don't take my word on it in the later chapters because this story just may become ultimate trash so don't read it if you don't want a kinda weird mc who say weird things I personally appreciate everything the mc say because it kind groovy you'll get why I used groovy when u read the book so thankyou for wasting time reading this when u could've been reading the story🖕
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It was kinda bad in the beginning and the word groovy really pisses me off but then it fades out and the writing improves the are multiple characters but the author does a wonderful job of developing them as a group while also keeping them separate characters i love this and I really hope it comes back.
I am no Doctor, but reading this, kept Carona away Thanks, cant wait for the new update, is really good read as you read it, you can see how he grown by not saying the magic word lol
I love this series and am confused as to why it has stopped updating but this is a great book that expands the wizarding world in the Harry Potter universe while also connecting the Vampire Diaries and does it very well
I thought I should write a review after I binge read it. I realy like hp fanfictions so I say what I what I find positiv. the story changes are alway very inovativ and lucien is an interisting charakter. The magic system also feel more whole since it isn`t only british magic. the background is well done and adds up for most parts. before I critisize I should say my english also is not good enought to write a book and I couldn`t have writen such a good book so you have my respect author. so now negative part about, you need too know all source material to realy get all charakter only the change of most charakter a noted and not the original. also all exept lucien often feel like puppet used for the store in a play but without emotions. also the author often missspells thinks or maybe just needs an editor. somen meaning I in a sentence. also the story lose its personality and the "grove". Still all in all its good for an for fanfiction and author still dint drop it
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Must be in the top 10 of hp fanfic its really great. Strong mc. Charecters well thougt throu. Baclgrpund is super just like a almost compleet different story of a differemt univurse just start reading the boek really great
Brillaint story one of the best I have read to date and the characters are well written and the expansive world created is amazing and bringing other stories into this one makes it even better you never know how anything is going to turn out or what's around the next corner I really enjoy it not being all about good or evil it's only about what's needed and what the mc wants in life. Can't wait for the next chapter and can't put it down until I have read all the chapters
It's a pretty good fanfiction. I like how it's going where in general. Give it a try if you have read more than one other fanfiction on this website.
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Goddamn this is good , mc ain't pushover whatsoever and not afraid learning about dark magic and cooperate with death eaters and Voldemort for mc own benefi.
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