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After losing Hedwig while escaping from Voldemort, Harry found it hard to come to terms with her death.
Filled with grief, rage and hatred, Harry swears to take revenge on every single death eater and especially on Voldemort himself.
Receiving power from unexpected sources, Harry sets out on his mission to bring the dark lord and his followers to their knees.
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This novel has been posted on Webnovel, Scribblehub, Fanfiction and RoyalRoad.
During the final rewrite, the plot changed so much that it was nothing like this one. So I posted it as a new story instead. Please go read that instead. It is called Harry Potter and the Dark Phoenix.
If I have time, I might finish this book with the current plot, but I don't have any plans as of now.
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really good chapters and story. keep up the good work. And please keep updating.really good chapters and story. keep up the good work. And please keep updating.really good chapters and story. keep up the good work. And please keep updating.
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Excellent start. Great Harry. Excellent writing. Excellent plot. Too many explanation for my taste,, but it's only a opinion,,, information that already explain in book and films, just pick them up but don't overdo it
First time i've seen this idea implemented and i'm loving it so far ! I find the writing easy to read, it flows seamlesly and can't really find gramatical error. I'm not searching for these errors so it's possible I have missed some but if it doesn't jump in my eyes while reading -> 5 stars for me. Keep up the good work :D The stability of updates : it's the beginning and we'll see how it goes ! For the time being and as an avid reader, I love having more to read *.* -> 4 stars Story Development : In the majority of what i've read, the start is always a bit glossed over to jump to the "good" parts but not here. Using the start to develop the character is the best *.* It helps understanding why the character do what they do in certain situation. The personnages introduced are fleshed out already and I can "see" their faces when they talk, really pleasing. I can't wait to see where you'll take the romance and hope it won't be "synthetic". -> Thus ! 5 stars for the Story Development, Character Design & World Background ** : I'm sure it's easy to see but I'm learning English and hope everyone can understand what I wrote ^^' PSS : First time ever writing a review ! Why am I nervous ?
no wonder author dropped! half of the chapters are copy paste from canon 90% same words. Mc have all the memory from voldy bit take his time to play with his friends t school PATHETIC
Finally someone's actually mentioning her death I mean I cries when she died and nobody in the movie didnt even think about her. Btw I haven't read the book yet so I'll be back reviewing soon bye!
🌹💎 Just started reading. Up to chapter 7. So far so good. Keep up the good work.
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Cant wait for more. This is a good chapter. And a good story. Please update more. Cant wait for more. This is a good chapter. And a good story. Please update more.
great. please update more please.great. please update more please.great. please update more please.great. please update more please.great. please update more please.
Author chapter is good. And the story is also good. The updates are consistent. Please update more. Author chapter is good. And the story is also good. The updates are consistent. Please update more.
Author. This is a really good chapter. And a really good story. story. The main character is awesome. The world building is good. I binged the entire story in one go. Please update more.
The story is looking good. The chapter was good. And the story is also good. And it is progressing. Good to see updates are consistent. Please update more.
This is a great chapter. And this is also a great story. The world building is great. And the Main Character (MC) is also great. Please update more.
Really good chapter. And really good story. I am liking this story very much. The MC is good. And the update is consistent. Please update more.
Really good chapter. And Really good story. I am really liking the story. The world building is great. And the main character is also great. Please update more.
dropped it here, don't like reading dumb idiot puppet harry, guess i was just expecting too much from this fic, i thought with the memories of voldie he'll be a bit smarter but nope he's super idiotic and its incredibly annoying