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Grand Voyage, Can I Invite Traveling Sims
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Accidentally crossed into the world of great voyages and awakened the simulation system. Able to continuously acquire abilities through Sims to strengthen themselves. It is also possible to invite companions to simulate, free prostitution. At Luffy’s invitation, Lin Lai decided to join the pirate group that had touched him countless times. Therefore, in the continuous Sims, the painting style of the entire Straw Hat Pirates has changed. Luffy: “The sound of freedom that resounds in the sky, the form of the sun god.” Sauron: “Swastika, six-armed Asura.” Nami: “Thunder Dragon Slayer Magic.” Robin: “Thousand-handed Buddha. “Frankie: “Gundam!” Lin Lai looked helplessly at the enemy in front of him. “My companion is too strong, I don’t even have a chance to make a move.”
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Ok sorry for the wait but I've been busy at work in 9 chapters in and I can tell you now it's not a copy and paste from the story that on fanfiction.net it's a rewrite being the story back there are some small changes here and there, and I'll get into those later. Its is the same premise Luffy go back in time to stop his crew from dying agenst the world government. It dose show a less dense Luffy that is great. But do to the fact that the story this was based off of was made years ago the timeline is really off like does Luffy have his Gear 5 and all of his advance Haki. And the reminds me why dosen't Luffy use the 6 powers more and combines with his movesets. One thing I dont like is that Luffy is still very immature and as of chapter 9 has not really made many changes to the story/timeline. But I'm going to wait to finish the rest if the 21 chapters. TLDR This story is more of a rewrite this a copy and post from FF.net image Luffy with Haki and the 6 powers and there you go.
just started and I still can't get pass the 1st chapter. so many grammar mistakes and spelling errors. it's hard to understand what was going on