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86.66% fgo Ritsuka fujimaru (gudao) x servant / Chapter 13: Gudao has sex with Tamamo no Mae, Part 2

บท 13: Gudao has sex with Tamamo no Mae, Part 2

The noisy town fell silent.

Although it may be small, to the average person who doesn't know that this has become a singularity, they may be deeply affected by the return of this quiet and normal everyday life.

The man who soars through the sky on the back of an unknown creature and kidnaps a woman who was walking with her lover, but dressed as a woman, is no more.

No more blonde boy ties up a man with gold chains and then fucks his girlfriend in front of him.

The red-haired boy who attacks couples on horseback, kills the man, and then takes the woman away is no more.

Most people living in this town didn't know that there was a person who transformed the three people who normally wouldn't have done such a thing and became the cause of the micro-singularity.

The reason for this wasn't because he was a braggart, but because he was a special person. If you ask me, that's not the case. It was because he was a normal human being that people would deny him.

So why did that person do such a thing?

The reason is simple and clear: I was driven by a common emotion that everyone feels at least once.

That's because I started to hate "humans."

Those who dreamed of all the possibilities of human ideals and ideas have been easily accepted or denied by the anonymous humans behind the screens of the comfortable machines that appear in everyday life.

That's selfish.

I wish I didn't have to worry about that.

I don't like your idea.

It's a disgusting hobby.

You're wrong because this is right.

That idea is strange.

One after another, countless people are carried away by the numerous topics that continue to be discussed in the cyber world, where there are no correct answers, such as model answers in human thinking.

Someone's inconvenient ideal is another person's evil.

Someone's convenient thoughts are another person's good.

As long as there is someone's good, there will be another's evil.

This is how humans exist in the cyber world.

In the face of such an infinite world, the spirit of a single human being collapses like a building block and turns into an unknown evil. It tries to avenge the world, but is defeated by an unknown good that appears out of nowhere.

Because what I love was defiled.

Because I defiled what I love.

That's why I will do it like this.

This is what happened, so I had no choice but to do this.

I didn't like the happy boy, so I broke it.

I just imagined the two of them looking happy, but I was denied.

In a sense, it may have been a relief for a person to be freed from a life of endless hell where something dominated them.

Fujimaru: "Hechi!"

Tamamo no Mae: "Oh, do you have a cold, Master? Would you like a handkerchief?"

Fujimaru: "Ah, no. I have pocket handkerchiefs, so it's okay!"

Tamamo Mae: "Hmm. You're surprisingly well prepared... (I mean, isn't Happu! too cute to blow his nose at?)"

───────This fact will never be revealed to the people who appeared to restore peace to this town.

To gain someone's peace, he had to eliminate their evil.

Even if it was created by the people of this town, or even this world.

The people who exist in this small singularity, who don't know that there was a young man who risked his life to restore the everyday life of such a stranger, spend their time enjoying the peaceful everyday life that was taken for granted to them.

Regardless of the "process", they were satisfied with the "result".

Also, for the people living today, everything would be easier if they didn't have any "worries".

But still, don't forget that.

Some people give up on their ideas and throw them away just because a stranger tells them so, but there are also people who don't give up and say, "Still," even if a stranger says so.

How long would you have walked?

Personally, I'm satisfied with continuing to walk around the quiet town with Tamamo after the commotion has subsided.

Since I've been isolated in an isolation room, I haven't been able to even walk properly, so time seems to be slowing down for me...

Although he did go to the microsingularity once to leave the isolation room, in the end he barely moved off the island and was just having sex with Artemis (F)...

That's why I'm so happy to be able to take a deep breath and exhale under the darkened night sky.

Fujimaru: "The air outside is nice."

Tamamo: "Isn't the air you breathe with me delicious?"

Fujimaru: "If that's the case, other people will be able to enjoy it too, so I won't say anything."

Tamamo no Mae: "Oh, I didn't expect that answer."

Fujimaru: "I'm sorry for the compliment."

Tamamo no Mae: "…That tone doesn't suit me, so I'd like it to be normal."

Fujimaru: "I see…"

Well, I was trying too hard, so I'm glad I can just leave it at this point.

By the way, what time is it now?

When I looked around, I saw a clock that had been placed in a park lit by a street lamp.

Well… After all, I'm using more than half of the two-day limit for treatment, so I have to check the time carefully.

It went from 23:49 to 50 hours.

Fujimaru: "─────────me?"

Tamamo no Mae: "What's wrong, Master?"

Fujimaru "────O"

In front of Tamamo: "Oh?"

I stretched out both hands, grabbed my head, and let out a scream with all my heart, no matter where I was.

Fujimaru: "I only have 10 minutes left in my life!?"

I started to feel like time was slowing down, and before I knew it, the life time limit that had been imposed on me became dangerous.

Remaining time for Fujimaru: 9 minutes 58 seconds

Tamamo no Mae: "Then, Master, you will be mine."vaginal ejaculation Before we continue, I would like to ask you three questions."

Fujimaru: "What!? At this time!?"

Yes, that's right, because this question can only be asked at this moment.

Also, let me tell you that right now I'm so desperate that I don't have the leeway I usually have, do I?

In order to accept your magically modified gem, I played with my body, but it was so out of size that the first thing I felt when it was shoved into my thighs wasn't the pleasant feeling of pleasure, but intense pain, right? insert tómago It's still very difficult even now! ?

I took the trouble to have a one-on-one with the master (the woman sits face to face with the man who is sitting on something), but now instead of kissing me, he's touching my cervix because of his extremely thick penis. It hurts because I'm being pushed up!

In my mind, I responded to his eye-catching reaction with a eye-catching response.

─────────Now, let's get the story straight...

Suddenly, my Master shouted loudly beside me, so when I checked what was going on, he said, "I only have 10 minutes left in my time limit!" Simply put, if I don't have sex with the woman who is my healer within two days, I will inflate like an overfilled balloon, burst, and die!!" he said succinctly.

No, wait a minute, okay? I almost said it, but I shoved it down my throat.

While I was immersed in the sense of accomplishment of having solved the microsingularity problem that was full of problems (I was a caster and there were two enemy Rider-class servants), I prepared myself for this moment after showing off her yukata, she was alone with her master and was in a good mood, and where she planned to have lovemaking in the name of therapy?

Is that all?

The master I was walking with made a shocking statement that was hard to believe even if he said it briefly.

Or rather, even when Da Vinci explained to me about the Master's explosion and death, I wasn't told.

After all, they don't create a virus that explodes and kills people, that rabbit (Koyanskaya of Light) and the final boss-type junior duo (BB)...!

It took about 18 seconds after Master's shocking confession to sort out the huge emotions swirling inside me like a hurricane, but I changed my mind, carried him on my shoulders, and quickly left the scene.

Why did you leave that place?

Even though it was the middle of the night, one of the residents must have heard Master's loud scream and called the police, because the sound of a police car's siren was approaching from the distance...

It makes me angry that even though I was completely useless for this problem, I suddenly became competent in this case...!

At this point, the remaining time is 9 minutes 29 seconds.

Anyway, I didn't have much time, so I moved with Master on my shoulder and looked for a place with few signs of people, and when I found some high ground in the right place, I hurried over there.

When we reached the hill, we had 8 minutes and 35 seconds left.

If it were true, I would talk to my master about this and that while looking at the scenery that could be seen from here, and we would naturally get closer to each other… I wanted to do something like that, but I don't have time, so I quickly take it back.

Yes ♪

Fujimaru: "Eh!? Hey, don't suddenly take off your clothes!?"

Although his life is in danger, why is this person reacting like a child?

And since I didn't know the information about Master who was the target of the treatment (because I did Rayshift before receiving explanations from the media), the situation wasn't that good, but things didn't go well from here either. ...

In front of Tamamo: "… huh?"

Well, I've seen quite a few male jewels, haven't I? I wonder how much the master's "sole" will be. I was looking forward to it while licking my tongue.

───────It's so… grotesque…

7 minutes and 51 seconds left

In front of Tamamo: "Eh… I don't have an erection… right?"

Fujimaru: "…Yeah."

─────── Really?

Even if I didn't look closely, I could tell that he wasn't erect because he wasn't arching in the way that seemed to rise towards the sky.

I blurted out what I was thinking while sweating profusely from my forehead, the kind that happens to you when you see something horrible.

In front of Tamamo: "Isn't it as thick as my arm even if it's not erect?"

Fujimaru: "It seems like…"

Tamamo no Mae: "It seems like… it's not!? It's too crazy, what's the size!? When it gets erect, it's as big as Goji◯'s tail!? Are you going to kill people with your dick! ?"

Fujimaru: "If it gets to that point, are you not a human anymore!? I mean, if you can kill someone with a dick, is it already a good weapon!?"

In front of Tamamo: "Is it so brutal that it can kill someone!? If I were to describe it in terms of attributes, it would go from evil to extremely evil!!"

Fujimaru: "Is that all!? Haven't you heard anything from the media?!" What's with the lewd marks!?

Tamamo no Mae: "I don't know any information after Da Vinci's briefing!? Or rather, that's what you mean by wearing lewd crests!?"

Fujimaru: "What does that mean?"

In front of Tamamo: "If you don't strengthen your body, it's so dangerous that you'll die!! I'm going to play around with my body a bit, so please wait a moment!!"

Fujimaru: (When we have sex, it's normal for the other woman to have a lewd media image of her, so I forgot about it, but now I realize that when other people see me, it's just another woman.) I'm desperate, realizing that it's a deadly weapon.)

I started to play with my body beside my master, who had a look of despair, but I couldn't concentrate for a moment because my master's brutal penis was in my line of sight...

At this point, the remaining time is 7 minutes and 17 seconds.

By the time Tamamo, who had finished strengthening herself, managed to receive Fujimaru's extremely thick penis into her vagina, there were less than five minutes left.

Tamamo no Mae: "Then, Master, you will be mine." To continue, I would like to ask you three questions."

Fujimaru: "What!? At this time!?"

And that brings us to this point.

She is not a magician but a sorceress, and although she regularly strengthens her body, it seems to take her a little time to strengthen her body (although she closes her eyes to concentrate, Fujimaru's extremely thick penis flickers). I think it's not because I was watching that I was late.

There are 4 minutes 32 seconds left until the time limit

The question and answer session that will determine the fate of humanity is about to begin.

For Fujimaru, it is a life-threatening answer, but for Tamamo, she starts asking questions like a woman.

Tamamo no Mae: "First of all, did you lose your virginity to Koyanskaya of Light or BB?"

Fujimaru: "I don't understand."

In front of Tamamo: "Eh?"

Fujimaru: "I wasn't conscious… If I was conscious, I would become a medium…"

In front of Tamamo: "…Eh…"

The first question and answer session ends with 3 minutes and 52 seconds left.

Tamamo no Mae: "Okay, the second thing. Kohon... Ah, I don't really want to say it, but out of all the women you've hugged until today, who... did you feel the most?"

Fujimaru: "Eh? Not at all."

In front of Tamamo: "That's not right! It's not! It's just one person! If you lie, I'll die with you!!"

Showing her anger at Fujimaru's response, Tamamo rotates her fingertips in a circular motion and a magic circle appears at the base of her extremely thick penis, squeezing it tightly.

Fujimaru: "Come on!? What!?"

Tamamo: "It's a technique that won't let you ejaculate! If you don't answer seriously, you'll reach your time limit!"

Saying that, Tamamo's index finger seemed to display the technique. Gugugu... Fujimaru begins to scream as he slowly begins to bend.

Fujimaru: "Dede de de de de de de de de de de de de de de de de de de de de de de de!?! I-It's going to tear you to pieces!! It's going to tear you to pieces!!

In front of Tamamo: "If it gets torn to pieces, I'll make it grow back, so please answer quickly!!"

Fujimaru: "Isn't it scary!? I get it! Raikou! Raikou-san felt so good!!"

In front of Tamamo: ────(tightens grip silently)

Fujimaru: "Why is it so bad!?"

It's not a big deal, but it doesn't seem like an exchange meant to save humanity, and that's what I'm thinking as I write this.

3 minutes 12 seconds until time limit

Tamamo no Mae: "Okay, last question."

Fujimaru: "Oh, oh…! (He breathes heavily and sweats profusely from his forehead)"

Tamamo no Mae: "Regardless of the reason, if the maids who made a vow with you wanted to live with you until the end, how would you respond?"

Fujimaru "────────"

The next moment, Fujimaru heard Tamamo's last question, his labored breathing and the cold sweat that had been falling down his forehead suddenly stopped.

There are 3 minutes left until the time limit

Tamamo no Mae: "Regardless of the reason, if the maids who made a vow with you wanted to live with you until the end, how would you respond?"

The last question Tamamo asked me was going around in my brain like a washing machine spinning the options.

With me… until the end?

Medea: "Yes, you don't have to hold back from now on."

For me, the therapy started with Medea.

Up until today, the treatment had gone smoothly thanks to the hints she had given to all those chosen to be the healers… just like Tamamo said, normally. I could never accept it, let alone accept it…

Artemis F: That's why I want to be with you. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this once-in-a-lifetime miracle and be glad that you were able to cope with what you needed even at this time."

Artemis was born for the purpose of treating me.

Although she was created for my own selfish reasons, she thanked me for needing her.

Once this incident is over, she will never be reborn again. She confessed to me once and for all…

Artemis F: I want everything about you… So please turn me into Artemis who only loves you."

My own Artemis…

Jeanne alter : "────────If you do, it will happen."

Jeanne alter(Swimsuit) "I'll do my best, Konchikusho───────!! ! "

Two evil people.

Well, it's strange that there are two, but the number has increased... erm... yes...

I remember feeling a little better with Jeanne alter, maybe because we had known each other for a long time from the beginning.

The weight of my tense heart has become lighter, or rather… Ah, but it may not have changed the fact that it was still difficult because I was running wildly in my swimsuit…

In the end, I also remembered that after that, I became even more out of control than before… Sorry, you two…

As for the light Koyanskaya and BB….

....

Raikou: "My everything is dedicated to you"

Raikou promised to sacrifice everything for me.

────────That's right.

Although there were so many people willing to help me, I still haven't found a suitable answer.

I am...

What I have to do is...

1 minute and 7 seconds left

Fujimaru "──────── Tamamo"

In front of Tamamo "Yes"

Fujimaru: "Even if it is like this, will you be with me until the end?"

Tamamo no Mae: ``────────Yes. I hereby swear that I will serve you by your side until the moment you run out of life and die.''

Fujimaru: ──────── Thank you, Tamamo.

With a big smile on her face, Tamamo brought her face closer and kissed me, and at the same time released the technique that prevented her from ejaculating, and made sure to impregnate the maid she had stored in her storage from her extremely thick penis. A large amount of sperm was released into the uterus.

35 seconds left

Sperm MGSH3GWFB1 "Hurry up! There are only 7 seconds left!"

Sperm MG5 "There are 10 seconds left to reach the egg"

Sperm 133: "Well then, just in time… Ah, what about him!?"

"Sperm M87! !"

Fujimaru's sperm implants itself into the egg in front of Tamamo.

Time remaining 0 tenths 4 seconds

Ritsuka Fujimaru's survival

Facing Tamamo: "It seems to be okay…"

Fujimaru: "Haha…! That's good…"

Perhaps because he had released his tension, Fujimaru dropped his head onto Tamamo's chest.

Tamamo no Mae: "Anh… huh? You ejaculated after pushing yourself to the limit and your body lost its strength?"

Fujimaru: "I guess that's what it feels like… I'm really tired…"

Tamamo gently strokes Fujimaru's head, who has jumped onto his chest, as if to praise him.

Tamamo no Mae: (Well, it's true that it's my fault that Master has worn down his spirit to the limit... I have to do something about it... Uuuuu... My stomach is filled with Master's semen. It hurts. ...)"

With the extremely thick penis inserted into her, which remained hard without shrinking even after ejaculation, Tamamo moved the yukata she was wearing so as not to involve Fujimaru's head, exposing her breasts.

Fujimaru: "Oh..."

Tamamo no Mae: "What do you think, Master? My breasts don't compare to others', do they? (Though I'm sure they pale in comparison to Raikou's...)"

While thinking about this, Tamamo also thought about finding out about Fujimaru's hobbies and changing her body to suit his tastes.

But in the end she didn't want to do it.

Tamamo no Mae: (Because I want to please them, there's no point in changing me.)

Because I want to please you.

Tamamo's simple and natural desire, regardless of gender, was enough for Tamamo to be convinced that she had made the best decision in this situation.

Tamamo no Mae: "My mouth, my breasts, my private parts, everything that makes me up is yours… what are you doing?"

Fujimaru gulped as he watched Tamamo, who placed her hand on his shoulder as she took off the yukata she was wearing, smiling bewitchingly under the light of the full moon.

Fujimaru: "If you say so much, I guess I'll let you enjoy it as you please."

Tamamo no Mae: "Please enjoy it until your desires are satisfied, my Master."

As if they were immersed in a world just for the two of them, Fujimaru and Tamamo pressed their lips tightly together, their bodies stacked on top of each other as if deepening their feelings for each other.

In front of Tamamo: "Hmph! Nah...! Well, Master's extra thick penis... is rubbing my pussy violently while squeezing... Ahhh!"

Tamamo lets out a moan as he leans his back against the railing placed on the hill while Fujimaru gives him a violent piston.

Fujimaru: "Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu." oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! ! THEN I'll make it even more intense… ok!"

In front of Tamamo: "Eh...m-hiyaa!?"

With that said, Fujimaru released the hand that was gripping Tamamo's waist, stretched out his own arms, grabbed the ankles of both of her legs, lifted her up, and changed her position so that her legs were spread to the left and right, and opened her thighs, taking advantage of the opening, I began to thrust more violently than before.

In front of Tamamo: "Ah! This is not good...! M-Master's...! He is penetrating deep into my cervix and is hitting... N-ah! Nggaaaaaaaaah!... yes!!"

Fujimaru is confident that Tamamo, who has not been branded as lascivious by the media, will be guided towards pleasure by the experience he has cultivated Coupled with the numerous treatments he has received to date make the act even more violent.

Fujimaru: "Argh…! I-it could be dangerous if you raise your voice so much…!"

Tamamo no Mae: "Kufun! Okay…! For the sake of this moment when you and I love each other, I will reveal my weak voice…!"

The smell of sweat and obscene juices spreading around them as they engage in violent acts stimulates the two of them even more, making them even more lewd.

In front of Tamamo: "Oh, look… Master's favorite breasts are shaking violently… Hmm!! W-Would you like a drink…?"

Fujimaru: "Haa… haa… ah…! I want to drink it, so please let me drink it…!"

Tamamo-no-mae: "Ah… then, please have a drink…"

Tamamo let go of the railing behind her and grabbed both of her breasts, which were shaking violently due to the pistons, and fixed them in a position where Fujimaru could easily drink.

As if giving in to her kindness, Fujimaru leaned forward and sucked the nipple at the tip of Tamamo's breast, which was erect from excitement.

Facing Tamamo: "Nmph!! M-Master...! Nhii, kufunn... Oh, if you thrust hard while sucking my breasts, I'll cum right away too... Anh!!"

Fujimaru: "Jururururu!! Nsuck, suck! You can do whatever you want (you can cum as many times as you want)! I'll do my best (I can still do my best)!"

Fujimaru says some clumsy words as he sucks her nipples, but his words are true, and he ejaculates again and again in time with Tamamo's slight climax, but his thick penis continues to roar inside her vagina.

In front of Tamamo: "Aa ... aa ... hips even faster, pressing his well-trained belly against Tamamo's belly, which was bulging like a small mountain after receiving a large amount of ejaculation from his extremely thick penis.

Fujimaru: "Gungggg, npuhaa!! I'm coming, Tamamo...! Please accept my offspring...!"

Tamamo no Mae: "Y-yes...! P-please pour it all over me...! Please pour it all out until my stomach is full...!!"

Fujimaru: "I'm gonna cum, I'm gonna cum...!!"

In front of Tamamo: "Iguuuuuu!!"

Zushin! Fujimaru aimed at Tamamo's private parts and with a single thrust, sperm was released into her. intravaginalainsideWe'll fill it to the max.

Perhaps because she had reached a huge climax, Tamamo let her tongue hang out of her open mouth, making a dejected expression on her face.

In front of Tamamo: "Oh, oh, uh, uh, uh, ah…ah…"

Fujimaru began to move his hips again even though Tamamo was immersed in the afterglow as her entire body contracted, even though he was about to ejaculate.

In front of Tamamo: "Noo!"

Fujimaru: "I told you, Tamamo."

In front of Tamamo: "Hmm, ah, ah…"

Fujimaru: "I can still do my best."

In front of Tamamo: "Hmm!?"

With that said, Fujimaru carelessly pressed his lips against Tamamo's empty mouth and gave her a deep kiss, intertwining their tongues, then released her ankle and began massaging both of her breasts while violently pounding her again.

Tamamo no Mae: "(T-This sexual desire... Ah, it's obviously abnormal... I-If you don't handle it quickly, you'll die...) N'n'n'! N-nnnn!!

After that, no one living in this village came near this hill at night.

One of the reasons is that rumors like this arose.

I came near this hill at night, but in the end I was raped and killed by the demon of lust... (by a policeman patrolling the area)

Fujimaru and Tamamo return to Chaldea

Medea : "Hey, what happened at the scene!? The machine was displaying ``How many minutes until the time limit'!?

Artemis F: "Are you okay, Ritsuka!? Is there something that hurts? I borrowed bandages from Nightingale, so I have a lot of them!? (I brought them without permission, and the bandages are scattered all over the floor.)"

Jeanne alter : "Are you sure you're okay!? Ah... what were you doing until the last minute, you idiot!!"

Jeanne alter(swimsuit) "Please don't give me a surprise like this again!? I was really worried..."

Raikou : "Are you okay, Master!? Do you have a headache, chest pain, or... umm... do you have pain in your vagina!?"

Koyanskaya of Light and bb "No, that's not right"

The two of them return for a short while, but the maids push Tamamo away and approach Fujimaru first.

The girls who had gathered there looked at Fujimaru with a mix of worry and anger.

I'm sorry for worrying you too, Fujimaru… He continued to bow his head, and once he received permission from the girls, his expression changed.

Fujimaru: "Listen up everyone."

All the maids ``? ? "

Tamamo no Mae: (Sends a silent cry to Fujimaru, "It's a fight, Master!")

Fujimaru: "Su… haa… suu… haa…"

To once again show his determination, after taking several deep breaths, Fujimaru confessed his determination to the girls with a serious expression on his face.

Fujimaru: "When your role in Chaldea is over... Would you like to live with me?"

All the maids "..."

Needless to say, after a moment of silence, the maid's scream echoed throughout Chaldea.

secret conversation log

BB: "I never thought Senpai would confess like that…"

Light's Koyanskaya: "Isn't it right? It's necessary for a leader to show his determination."

BB: "A leader…"

Light's Koyanskaya: "Well, it's a big problem. I guess I'll do my best to respond to Master's feelings."

BB: "What do you mean by working hard?"

Light's Koyanskaya: "Everything is decided. I just need to work hard outside."

BB "..."

Light's Koyanskaya: "I'm glad you understand well. The obstacles" are simply too great for Master's wishes to come true. Even if the servant has completed his role in Chaldea, the servant will be expelled without questions asked ───────The children who will be born have two options: either they will be taken by the Magic Association or they will be eliminated. If things continue like this, we will go straight. to the BADEND route."

BB: "...Certainly, if there is no escape route to the outside world, there is no place for the girls, including me, to go."

Koyanskaya of Light: "That's what it is, that's why I will go out and take action against it."

BB: "Are you okay on your own?"

Koyanskaya of Light "I'm not alone."

BB: "...That's right."

Koyanskaya of Light: "So I left this and the master with you. The rest is up to you."

BB: "If you want to apologize to him, do it directly. I will also send you a report on the progress of your treatment in the form of data, so do so."

Koyanskaya of Light: "I agree. I'll also look for something that will help with the treatment... Then I'll leave. If by any chance I leave it, I'll erase it so that not a single piece of it is left behind."

BB: "...Yes. Please leave. If you make a mistake and disappear, I'll do everything in my power to eliminate you."

Koyanskaya of Light "Bold Good"

BB "That's all"

BB: "...Okay. Are you going to do your best?"

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