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Eternal life begins with saving my clan

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[Ding!]

[System Binding....]

[10...20...30...%&...@#,,,]

[Unknown Error! Unknown Error!]

[System unable to bind successfully]

[Invoking the emergency protocol]

"Hey, System!"

"System! Where are you?"

[Host bound to the Lotus World Providence]

[Host has gained eternal life]

"Hell yeah!"

Sigh!

"That was me... 10 years ago..."

"Now..." He took a deep breath and shook his head dejectedly.

Su Yen transmigrated to the Lotus World with high hopes after receiving his system and gaining eternal life.

"It's my time to rule the world!"

However, his grand ambitions came crashing down when he realized his system was nothing more than a knockoff.

"Who on earth created this pathetic knockoff system?!"

Sigh!

"At least, I can live forever and enjoy my life without ruling the world."

Once again, his naive thoughts were shattered when he realized the world was not as peaceful as he thought.

He needs to increase the world's providence to enjoy this life or else...

He'll be damned to eternal suffering.

"System! I don't want eternal life again!"

"Please make me mortal!" He cried.

It was then he realized the importance of power.

You need strength to get what you want, but too much strength is also a curse, especially when the Bloodmoon Envoy arrives...

They start killing the strongest ones.

Su Yen, being immortal, wasn't scared of the Bloodmoon Envoys, but what about his loved ones? And what about the world providence?

Now, in the Lotus World where everyone is terrified of breakthroughs,

What can he do?

Too much talent is a curse. Lack of talent is also a curse.

"What kind of a messed-up world is this?"

Su Yen is in a dilemma about what to do with his life in this complicated world. However, everything changes when his clan is on the brink of destruction.

He must make a decision.

"Who cares about the world?"

"But no one dares to touch my clan and loved ones."

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_EverSmile

Hey, Author here. I'll be bias and give my book five star. Though I know it worth it. Let dive straight to what to expect from this book. A wise and overpower Mc that will not think with his little brother. Harem. Yes. System. Yes. Mystery. Yes. Revenge. Yes. Worldbuilding with modern invention introduce by the Mc. This is a story where the MC is not going to level up alone, but the whole world will grow stronger with him. A fight not only against the Mc, but the world itself. A story where a mortal planet ascend to the upper realm and dominate other realms with the Mc. With Modern invention and Ancient Techniques; the Mc and the Lotus World dominate the multi universe. Guess, this is all I can say. If you want to find out how everything unravel. Read to find out. Cheers.

1yr
ดู 14 การตอบกลับ
Dzero
LV 15 Badge

I read a lot of the starting off immortal genre, and I came into this story expecting much of the same, but I was wrong. This is a great novel already, and I just made it to the premium section when it began to pick up more traction. It has me hooked and was immediately added to my favorites. If you are looking for a novel to read, then I suggest you pick this one up.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Daoist_Culture

Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks

1yr
ดู 9 การตอบกลับ
Fanjo
LV 4 Badge

It is a good read until i realised that it is a system story. I dont read system stories but i still leaving behind a good review as it is an interesting story N a good read.

1yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Daoist4bMk5P

don't know anything from how the world works or looks or anything about cultivation and its levels and it jumps from one thing to the other it needs to slow down and give more info about everything and if it did it would be a great novel bit now it's just Ok(chapter30)and sorry english is not my first language

1yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Darktea9876

The story harbored a promising premise, but fell short of its potential. While the concept was intriguing, the execution lacked depth across various elements such as character development, kingdom building, and pacing. Although the main character showed promise, the supporting cast remained superficial. Similarly, while glimpses of a well-built kingdom were evident, overall depth was lacking. The storyline felt rushed, denying readers the chance to fully immerse themselves in the plot's intricacies. As the narrative progressed, the initial intrigue waned, leading to a gradual decline in engagement. Overall, while the book had potential, it ultimately failed to live up to it.

9mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mohd_Afzal_8933

Every chapter don't start where last chapter end and there are many things left to imagine us by ourselves . world building and character design are also so-so . I thought this is good novel but I was wrong beware of fake comments

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Master_Celestial

I loved the idea… the execution not so much.

1yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
sgcn
LV 14 Badge

the current path of the book looks good, even though some chapters are average but the overall flow is good so am I enjoying reading this book till now

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
papa_mozzarella

good story the world building is kinda unique

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Medas_Morningstar

i hate making reviews. too much work.but this book deserves it . at least for me it fits what i like .

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ibee_
LV 3 Badge

Let the reading begin I'm enjoying it.💃🏼

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Sage_of_thruth

a very promising beginning claiming that the author does not abandon it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
itsfarxs

Just read it you don't even need that many chapters to find out that it's really great novel and very entertaining and the more you read it the more it gets better.

12mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
The_prezismoke

Love it keep up the good work n we need more new chaps [img=update][img=update]

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jokkier
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Enjoying this a lot I like the idea of morden equipment being developed in the novel in a way that makes sense , hope for more uploads.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
CasuallyPolite

This is the kind of book you get into when you get the urge to read something ‘Different’ for a change. Not so bad writing, surely promising plot line, and the frequently, popular system that we all love. (Great cheat codes.) Support the author so he doesn’t drop this book immaturely…

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
trevorb98

would give full remarks if I didn't come when the author publishes 3 chapters a week. this story i chanced upon but found really enthralling. the pace and development is slow yet fast. it's a remarkable find in a stack of underwhelming stories being published all the time. I'm caught up to chapter 418 now after binge reading and find myself feeling destitute that I have to wait for the next chapter with how enthralled I've been.

27d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Rohit_Kamble_1007

I really like this novel look interesting and promising can you update ⏩⏩⏩⏩⏩

2mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
AntF_2942

This is better than 90% of the stuff you read on here Not the best but it’s a high level of good

11mth
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