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Reincarnation always seem to go well, so what would happen in the case of a reverse reincarnation?
If you are curious, then come along for this adventure in which Adam, a young man desperate for money, will find himself with the memories of a 50 years old martial artist.
For verification's sake, I started cohosting the story on Royal Road. My account there is SlyOW.
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So let's be honest, this review isn't really here to explain anything or whatever, it's just for an additional 5 Star review. Consider dropping a good review for the honesty bros. Of course you can write a negative one, as long as you are constructive, although that would be hard before getting to at least 10 chapters...
good work, but try to not end this prematurely like your other tho, some of them feels too rushed both in character development or the story progress itself. this one have far wider range of possibility, to try to not messed it up
First, this is the most underrated story on webnovel. Second, its not premium. Third, its just amazing. Ill give a TLDR because this will get long. TLDR: Read it. While the pace can be slow in some areas, and there really doesnt seem to be a real threat to the mc at the current time, every chapter is still interesting and fun to read. It keeps you reading, has great quality, and isnt nearly as cliche as most novels. Now for the real review (contains spoilers): Writing Quality - if I could give 4.5 I would, but i couldnt figure out how. it deserves a five over a four though. Great grammar, good structure, varied sentence length, no gender mistakes, nothing. I would give a 4.5 because every now and then a word is spelled wrong or is replaced with a wors that is spelled similarly but has a different meaning. This happens to perhaps one word every 2-3 chapters. The grammar is phenomonal. Update stability - It updates at around the same time day in and day out. I dont mind daily releases because the quality stays consistent and the chapters arent too short. Story Development - Four stars, would have gave 3.5 if I could have. As much as im addicted to the story, its plot is just not something i find...unique? Fresh? Interesting? While the book is not very cliche, the plot is not what I would call revolutionary. Its the typical worlds are merging save the earth story of many video game web novels. Of course, it is done far better than 99 percent of any other story on this site. Also, i never feel a sense of urgency for the mc. Yes, the worlds will merge, yes, humanity is in danger, but the mc will be fine. He grows so quickly that it feels like all problems will just be frozen in ice by his power. I feel nothing for the side characters impending doom because none of the side characters are prevalent enough to make me care. overall the plot just kinda seems like “man goes to VR, Man is OP, man travels around getting more OP, but wait, the big bad is in the background doing....something? Who cares! Fancy armour awaits! All that said, its a general and slightly boring overall plot that is fed to us in a very engaging and interesting way. the plot is not anything great, but its delivery is phenomonal. Character Design - Also a bit flat. The mc is great! He has morals, he has character, he has desires. Everyone else.....Ive read every chapter as it has come out and i can remeber three actual names beyond the generic “mom.” We have Neith, awesome pet spider whose personality i still dont really know. Thalia, stuck out because she was a princess and was a unique character. And King Slayer, only because he is the basically the ***ond in command. Everyone else is just kinda off to the side in “remember if I see them, but dont care about them at all.” While this is due to the mc being alone with Neith most of the time, it not only detracts from the world but also from the plot, as stated earlier. Of course, I love alone time with Adam, its why I read the book, but if im being objective, the lack of character interaction and personality beyond Adam is hurting the story overall. World Development - This is well done. We have gods and stuff in the background we know a bit about, the world has history, it has factions, power struggles, and every nation is unique in its own way. they have thwir own cultures, and the world is well explored through Adams travels. overall, i would say world development is a strong point of the novel. Closing remarks - probably the best book on webnovel. Room for improvement in characters and a bit in plot development (they are linked in this case), but overall, a great story if your looking for something hou wont have to decipher, gives you great fights, and really draws you into the world.
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Good novel it gives good experience. . ............. .. .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
The novel is amazin has a lot of thing going for it but the Arthur is so stupid as to leave such and amzing work and start 7 or 6 new novels that he didn' even finish all his work are incomplete the novel deserves a better arthour then him he failed as an arthour starting so many novels to not finishe them I have been waiting for over a year for a new chapter.
I've only read up to chapter 45 so my review may be inaccurate but so far the story has been great 👍 👌 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp]
⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二⊃
I’m giving this novel a max rating in the hopes that it garners more attention. It has almost perfect English and is well-written with few plotholes, yet it’s less popular a lot of the complete garbage. It’s not perfect, but for what its worth, I feel safe in calling this a hidden gem
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Fantastic novel all around. Probably the best pure mmorpg novel i've read. It takes everything from novels like Strongest sword god, great thief and virtually every other mmorpg based novel and does everything better.
Good novel go read it, dont read the review go read this amazing novel, go, go u fucking bastard GOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This novel is very good. MC is very OP but that's 99% of the novels. NPC's feel like real people who react to the world and are smart. The author here borrows from Naruto and reincarnation of the strongest sword god.
This is Sick. Great Novel keep up the work author!..........................................................................................................................
A non-berserk berserker!? how incredibly rare! It's a pretty interesting story so far which is saying something because I'm not really into gaming novels. My only complaint is that we don't have games like this in real life.
I have been looking for a story that has a more macho MC that isn’t obsessed with being beneath the radar. He has a viable plot reason for being driven to spread his fame. The guy can flirt and beat face without worrying too greatly about thinking. Story seems like it the MC will actually act like an MC, while the author is just there to progress the story without making fights complete nonesense to drive up illogical scenarious. Overall, I am greatly anticipating this novels progress.
It's an awesom Virtual Reality novel. Most of the times I don't like VR novels but this one is an exception. Can't wait for new chapters. Keep up the good work author.
great story i love the mc and ocs this is a will made story................................................................................................................................................................
This novel is criminally underrated, It is truly tragic a lot of trash novels occupy the top 200 leaderboards but that's Webnovel. I enjoy everything from the macho mc to the fact that he isn't afraid to show off his own achievements.