Eclipse Arcana

LV 1

Perishable_Heaven

This is one of those stories that a experienced reader can tell the author put their heart into. While the length of the chapters are on the short side i will say that each chapter carries its own personality. There were one or 2 errors I noticed while reading but it's not the big of a deal, I just tend to over edit my own work, so i tend to pay attention to the placement of every punctuation mark etc. etc. I would like to say this story has some potential down the line as it progresses. Keep up the work Author (^_-)b\

LV 3

MS_Studio_3460

A shameless Author review if you have any suggestions for this story you can suggest me here and if you have any questions or there's some mistakes you think I have made you can also show it here

LV 2

Daoist_Starweaver

If you love action then you'll love this. It begins with a load of action. As for the pacing, mostimes it can be fastpaced but it is also slowpaced at some scenes. Honestly an still not sure who the main character is since it wasn't introduced in the synopsis. Am thinking it's either our brave young hero or it's our masked one. somethings seem a bit confusing but am sure our beloved authorsan will explain them soon. And just like he has said he's improving so am expecting great things from this novel.

LV 12

WhiteAuthor

Honest Review: The Novel is quite engaging and very enjoyable. It has some grammatical mistakes, though, which could be fixed. Overall, it's a great novel, and I feel like as the author writes more and improves, it could indeed reach its potential. I say you should give it a shot.

LV 3

MS_Studio_3460

I just want to tell who ever read it the story writing in the few chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the future chapters. I'm a non English speaking person so please bare with me for just a few chapters

LV 12

ImmortalClown

I'm going to leave an honest review now. I must say, this is a rather interesting story. Although I have a few complaints such as grammatical errors here and there. Then there is also the problem about the spacing. Please don't join your words together. It makes it hard for the readers to read. Make use of paragraphs when a character wants to say something. Apart from that, I think the story is okay. Continue writing this story, Author. And may the story bless you.

LV 2

Abdul_Maliki

Nice book, Nice characters. A great story overall

LV 3

Jesserov

Pretty good, just that there are errors you need to fix here and there. Keep up the good work

LV 4

Aurelius_Imperator

All i can say is: [img=gift][img=gift][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=update][img=update]

LV 2

MasterOfGuardians

I really like this story. The world setting is quite interesting, and the story seems pretty reliable so far. I like this type of story, so i might as well stick to it till the end. The only thing is that the character introduction is a bit lost (tell me if i'm wrong). overall, it's perfect 👌.

LV 2

Dazzling_Verdict_5911

Great novel, the start is good and the pacing is just right. Highly recommended.

LV 3

BRAIN_BOSS

This book is the one of the best fantasy books I ever read, nice plot and setting, hoping to see more in the future.

LV 3

zowji

The novel's premise doesn't exactly establish a main character from the start. But the overall quality of the writing is solid, which can be improved on with just general spacing and splitting paragraphs and sentences when needed. I still like the progression of the novel and the pacing is just about fine in terms of getting through the scenes, Great work Author!

LV 13

HambinoRanx

Good overall story however I feel the Snypsis might be confusing readers. It doesn't really give people a good expectation of what is going to happen or what to expect. I suggest looking at writers like Brandon Sanderson, who has written some amazing Snyps. Are good Grammar errors also, but the story is good, the characters are likable, and the world-building has promise. It's a marathon, not a sprint, so keep it up and always be growing.

LV 2

Captain_Sadistic

The Novel has a promising plot with likable characters. They feel lifelike. someone you could relate with. The use of real-world locations makes imagining the story better. Although it's not perfect but still I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

LV 4

MasterCarlRoy

I must say, this is a rather interesting story. Even if in the early chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the futurechapters.

LV 12

Rene_Tokiori

As promised rene tokiori here , ill be leaving two reviews with this being the first to read your book, your synopsis sounds promising ill be back after the read

LV 11

Yuno_Jiro

Solid freaking book! There are a few things to patch up here and there, one of them being the fact that it takes over 9 chapters for the actual story to kick in. I'd suggest reading Revenge of the Weakest Hunter for references on how to properly execute a start to a story. This has love which is all readers can hope for✨

LV 1

RISHABH_Sharma

I love the story actually i love the writer writing way and his dedication in this AWESOME way of writing the story

LV 14

Lu_Shui

Action packed chapters from the start, very interesting world background with several kingdoms. Definitely worth reading for all those wanting to read an adventurous story!