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Leo is an average middle aged man that is reincarnated in another world. Join his adventures in this new world with its ups and downs.
The MC will not be childish or a hero that try to save everyone. The MC is strong but not overpowered. Please write your thoughts and make an evaluation on what I wrote so I can improve the novel!
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เขียนรีวิวOverall it's a good novel. Finally a novel where the protagonist learn earth magic. Hope the author read the novel true mage space
A good job with solid development, be it characters, script or world building, following an interesting premise, and a good personality of the protagonist. Worth the read.
The story is good. write updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please update this. The beginning is good. There is a lot of potential. Just keep going and don't give up. Let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Well everything is good but the updates are lacking a lot. Try to write more chapters. Just continue writing more. There is a lot of potential here.
Well, the story is good. I like it. It is sad that the updates are very very not stable, but I see the potential in this story. It can go a long way.
I can see the author put a lot of thinking in writing the noble. It is not some another stupid story about some face slapping or some other stupid stuff. It is refreshing to read this.
Good Job! The beginning is good. Try to continue the story and make more updates. The concept is interesting. Keep up the good work. Good luck!
นักเขียน Mr_Ne0
Write an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!