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Dragonball: Life simulator system(Hiatus)
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-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
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- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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☆☆☆☆ escrita é boa ☆☆☆☆☆ nesse momento, (18:40 sexta-feira, 16 de junho) tem uma boa atualização. ☆☆☆☆☆ gostei de como a historia esta indo ☆ não gostei do nome do protagonista, que tipo de sayajin tem o nome Alex. ☆ o nome do protagonista parece canon, ele se apresenta como Alex para o bardock, e ninguém se pergunta, porque caralhos existe um sayajin com o nome Alex. Obs: O nome dele mexeu comigo, tive a impressão de que a fanfic foi feita de qualquer jeito, mesmo que não tenha sido verdadeiramente assim.
great ideas but bad execution, the first chapters were fine then they were just time jumps and a small summary explaining what happened, no conversation or detailed explanation it seems like the story is a summary because there are moments where you skip the story too much, shin who can kill Freezer with a finger is declared slightly stronger than Freezer, the ki that increases as if there were no end without a gravity chamber or anything else in short full of plot holes