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Following the Douluo Dalu story with a different story and events for which he doesn't know why??
With the third spirit whose origin is unknown and a system whose background is frightening.
Meeting those he wasn't supposed to and falling in love with those he didn't expect to.
He has the same goal of reaching the top along with his Devil comrades and lovers. The system to help him with that along with the magical space from the wish he doesn't remember......
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Note: I will skip most fight scenes as it would take a lot of time and effort to write them and most readers skip them (personal experience).
I will also skip almost all 18+ scenes as they take more effort to write than fight scenes.
This novel is a fanfic of the original Douluo Dalu by Tang Jia San Shao.
The cover of this book is taken from the net so please inform me if you want it taken down.
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If you want a stupid mc and likes to share his things and system then this is for you. Imagine having a system since birth but still so weak. Weaker than his so called harem sometimes he forgot he is a transmigrated idiot. I'm sure in the future if someone ask mc to share his woman I'm sure mc will share them. That's amazing protagonist you got there.
Author here!! I've started a new novel and kept my other works in a slight pause. This story will be updated every Sunday with 3 - 4 chapters since I have a lot of studying to do during the weekdays. I've already made enough chapters for at least a couple of weeks so you'll have more chapters later on. Though I had a lot of other stories pop up in my mind when I was writing this one I'll start them only after I reach at least the half way mark for this story so don't worry about me dropping this anytime soon
One of the best douluo fanfics in my opinion, and the first i readed where the mc actually gets reborn as Tang San ..................................................................................
Writing Quality: 3/5 Average at best. One of the problems is how many punctuations marks you put in a sentence. Example: "What's going on here??" Stability of Updates: 2/5 1 Chapter per 3-4 days. Story Development: 2/5 Seriously I'm f*cking confused with the whole story since there is a lot of inconsistency on the plot. Example: "He had many regrets in his previous life which he was unable to fulfill like reaching the peak of the Mysterious Heaven Skill, using the Buddha Fury Lotus and many more." What the f*ck? I know that he has Tang San memories but it doesn't mean that he experienced Tang San life so how the hell does he have his regrets?. "But this time he used the hammering technique he learnt from his previous life as he wanted his father to teach him something different." I thought he was a doctor with a Ph.D. on the "energies beneficial to the human body and their effects" so how does he have time to learn some random hammering techniques that aren't really needed in the modern time? There's a lot of plot holes in the story that I won't mention since I'm too lazy but just reading the first 3 chapters will give you an idea of how many it is. Character Design: 2/5 Connected to the story development how inconsistent the main character past life is. World Background: 2/5 Can't really give this one a rating as I'm only at chapter 3 and will probably drop in a few chapters, still I'm gonna give this a rating based on how I enjoyed the first three chapter. The total score is 2.2 I know its probably unfair to rate a story just by reading 3 chapters but the interaction, the plot, characters, are just unbearable.
Well... Author has no idea what its going, its basically just a scramble of things of the Duoluo world with no semblance of integrity. All is mixed up and MC is already OP before even shrek academy, He also hates the main heroine xiao wu for some unexplained reason. The setting is completely different and thats ok but you can only take so much juice.... Also i noticed that 90% of the reviews with 5 stars are just done to get stars and nothing more, almost all of them have noting more than a few words with garbage like MORE MORE MORE or .............
There are better douluo dalu fanfics out there. The beginning is okay but after that it feels very lacking. The MC sometimes feels OP and sometimes jusy above average. His powers are also very random and don't get me started about grandmaster.
This is truly a hidden gem ! I love the flow of the story , it's not slow nor rushed . I like the harem idea , in all the 3 Douluodalus the author introduced talented women other than the FL who have a lot of potential. Sometimes, they are even better than her . I was absolutely disappointed in DD3 . I know the author was having a hard time with his wife being hospitalized. But still I , as a crazy fan of the douluo dalu series expected more especially the FL and her relationship with Tang Wu Lin . I also think that Wu Lin is too soft on his enemies. This novel saved me , it has a lot of potential, the Mc is not some 'I'M GONNA SAVE THE WORLD/EVERYONE' softy . I hope you keep on writing and please don't drop this amazing story.
Author where are you! Hurry up and update pls I been waiting for two months now. Anyway this is one of the best fanfic I read so far since I joined webnovel 2 years ago
Two vote given today. Another suggestion he can share his knowledge of sport doctor, designer, etc. Plus he can offer them to join tang sect and practice heaven cultivation method old one and purple eyes to grow there spiritual power. They can start practice heaven cultivation method in early stages. By develop technology knowledge for artificial ring before ascend to God hood. By profession of spiritual healer healing or suppression of evil spirit
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Well it started awesome but soon went downhill after 25+ chapers. Man why are you justifying a stupid op mc who wants to slow down his progress. Well its obvious that author doesnt have own genuine ideas and just wants to copy canons events. Heck i m telling you his first wife will be brsinwashed into being their enemy so that author goes according to cannons story.
TBH it's boring. Too many bull**** skills. And Mc is like Monk too.. Mc personality is like nei li. Sharing everything he have to anyone. And they r treating him a genius. LoL but he is just rank 40 in this latest chapter. If people is talking I think Mc looks like some side character. 🤔🤔 haixt. Can someone recommend me some fanfic with saint personality Mc?
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Thus is the best soul land fanfic that I have ever read please keep updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now I only want to ask the author, why do you hate xiao wu so much? Its like you're only tolerating her existence. I know she may be obnoxious or a spoiled girl from time to time but that's because she's spoiled by her family and tang san. And not only that she's a big part of the emotional support of tang San when his father disappeared and when he doesn't have anyone. Tang San doesn't have friends when he was young but xiao wu was there to support him but you made her a side character and make it feel like your about to throw her away. ~~SIGH~~ at the end of the day this is your novel and you can write whatever you want but its just a shame to witness a sweet character like xiao wu be dismissed and not be given the attention she deserved. And don't try to defend it cause you know it yourself that you're dismissing her like she's just their and completely unimportant. Poor girl. Make a doluo fanfic starring tang san, dismiss xiao wu. Yeah good job.
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