Douluo Dalu : Northern Berserker

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rogD

Bro if we analyze the character of bibi dong she is not capable of love after what happened to her [ in fact she hated her daughter to her dying breath and only admitted that she loved her at the end of her life in order to have peace after she passes] and if you want to write a romance I would recommend reading Dungeon Defence[LN NOT WN] where the romance between Lapis and Dantalion can apply in this case because with her Personality a normal relationship is not possible at all so you need to read a romance where FL is flawed but still finds love like that in dungeon defense and about the r-18 stuff ignore the braindead perverts you can only have it when their relationship progresses to a degree and that is certainly at this point many many chapters away you will know when to write then

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hewhoremained

this novel is for those who are tired of those bullshit Tang San bootlicking shit....Though it may look like the MC is helping tang san and his team grow stronger the MC is actually scheming something else as he tries to become the Real Antagonist of the story...the plot is surprisingly good too. Keep it up man....Don't worry about dickheads who say they dropping this or judging this...What do you expect from a novice writer...

LV 3

bitchlasagna

One of those stories where the MC gets everything but still complains like a btich and has 0 motivation to improve but in next life all of a sudden is power hungry all that requires is the same old family massacre and 'i need to bring them back to life attitude' just pisses me off

LV 13

Inferno_Vor

This is one of the most frustrating things I've ever read so I skipped till all the bullshit passed. I mean seriously, MCs mother decided suicide was better cause her husband will die so her child isn't important anymore, so author saw he went too far there and made it so her dragon instincts make dragons abandon their children if their mates live's are in danger, then MC ignored his AI chip system thing cuz he strong independent child that wants to grow strong on his own and not be instant op so author made it a hidden requirement to upgrade the AI system thing. IDK man... It's just pain....

LV 5

EroGaki

Honestly, I hate tragedies. Mhcycpycyfuvjbjvfkvufkfkguvkfkficfkcjcjfjcjcjfkfkfgycpcofphfpcpycpuchpchcpyc yup ugly dpt do ugly dpt spy cup do ugly flux ycpyvpyvphfpyvpyfphfpjcphxljdphxpgxlhxlhxlhcphcphflhclhclhchpcphcphxphxoxohcphxphsphspsphdphxphcpyvphc

LV 4

JuSt_A

this actually surprised me, because when i read the synopsis i thought it would be a normal OP MC type novel. but even though the MC is still OP the plot feels surprisingly good. keep up the good work author.

LV 4

PUERKO_Senpai

This fanfiction is pure S.H.I.T, the protagonist's parents die in chapter 4. the author was able to find better ways to develop the character than with that shit, it would have been better to reincarnate him as an orphan from the beginning.

LV 13

rogD

Amazing continue with the work done to drop it and certainly don't listen to the dumbass below, they are the retards who fail to understand what a fanfic is....

LV 5

IdleWolf07

i don't know what to say. The story is absurd. author just know abilities he know but he doesnt know the essense of douluo Dalu story. for those who truly like Douluo Dalu story. this story would get bad rating. spirit beast need cultivate from birth to 100000 years as spirit beast and then transform to human form in young age (6 years old) with full innate. Then culivate normally like normal human but can condense spirit ring for each 10 level. so spirit beast cant have more than 1 essense spirits. they could only have the spirit essense as his original body before transform. and never birth as baby humanoid. only human can have multiple spirit essense. either gift from awakening or external way like in Douluo dalu 2.

Love the concept. Hope the story can live up to my own and others expectation. Mark my words if this book can't reach 100k then.... For the most part this series is just starting so it may not look all that promising but for now imma leave a 5 star... adios MOFO

LV 13

rogD

Tang Yueha being pure is the biggest bullshit I heard!!!!! She had an affair with emperor Xue Yue and left him because she wanted freedom....... She's one of those " I want to be free and I don't want to be tied down - bullshit type"

LV 6

ONE_ABOVE_ALL

truth to told i am kind of searching for douluo dalu tang san, master, bashing even in chinese website its like rare gem out there i did found one itsnmy favourite hahah

Except for the characters personality and the cliche of killing the family everything seems good. The story is perfectly executed and I have already found my fav character. The AI Enron. I love that dude

LV 13

kickyx

very good story but it took me a while to actually start reading this because of the cover image and the title.. I had thought itd be a dude chasing skirts and not really having any depth. Boy was I wrong, this story is amazing! But you should really change both the title and the cover, for example for the title you can have it be something like Duoluo Dalu: Chaos or Duoluo Dalu: The Real Antagonist etc. etc.

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Egika

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yamate kuda saii authorr kunnn!!!!! aaaaaaa

really sad to see some retards posting bs complains in the chapters....this is a FANFICTION ffs. The author has the right to do anything with this story coz he is creating this and not you mf's like if you don't like it just gtfo from here. As mentioned by so many people, this author is a novice writer...yet he is giving us good content. Be thankful for that

LV 4

MadEyes

nice work author 👍 nice work author 👍 nice work author 👍 nice work author 👍 nice work author 👍 nice work author 👍 nice work author 👍 nice work author 👍 P.S: I am handsome than you!

LV 6

FAP_Master_

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Decimation

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