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15% Do I have a faulty system? / Chapter 1: broken system

บท 1: broken system

Hi, my name is Alex Mars, I live in New York, and as an adult, I work to support myself, I'm a fan of Chinese animes and romances, Korean too. I have black hair, black eyes, 180 cm tall, medium muscular build, in short, I'm just like anyone else.

Today is the weekend, I'm resting at home, I work a lot, so I usually stay at home on my day off.

POV: Third person...

Alex was lying on his bed, and as he lives alone, there was no one to disturb his quiet moment, until... Out of nowhere a screen appeared in front of his eyes.

[Skills System active.]

[Generating skill points for host to start... Error... Error... Skill points has been set to 'Unlimited'.]

[As a gift for activating the system, the host is entitled to three skill books, activating the skill lottery.]

[Warning, skill points can increase both skills and affinities and/or immunities, lottery roulette can also give skills and/or affinities and immunities.]

[The roulette wheel stopped, you gained... Wind Skill... Gravity Skill... Spatial Affinity.]

[Say 'Status' or think, there you can see your stats, there's also a shop that works with energy points, energy points are earned by killing living beings that have some energy, mortal without cultivation is not valid, for example. Good luck.]

"What the fuck is this? I died and I don't know?" Said Alex seeing all the notifications that appeared.

"Is this real or am I going crazy after so much work? Anyway...Status.!"

[Name: Alex Mars (Don't mind his last name)

Age: 25 years old

Cultivation: Has not started.

Abilities: Wind (1+), Severity (1+) (N/A: O (1+) means the skill is at level 1 and level up)

Affinity: Space (1+)

Immunity: None

Skill Points: Unlimited

Energy Points: 0 (To use in shop.)

shop ->

Inventory ->]

"Interesting, if this is really happening, then my system is super broken... System, explain to me the skill levels and cultivation."

[Cultivation:

Apprentice (1-10): Begins the path of cultivation.

Mage Reinforcement (1-10): Reinforces the body and initiates the core that will contain mana, the core will be in the abdomen.

Mage (1-10): The core is fully formed, the lifespan is 150 years.

Great Mage (1-10): The mana core will change to the color that corresponds to the affinity, of course with this, the mage will have a greater affinity with said element.

Master Mage (1-10): Can use mana to fly, lifespan is 400 years.

Grandmaster Mage (1-10): Core expanded, lifespan 600 years.

Near Holy Mage (1-10): Gains the Mana Regeneration ability (Passive.).

Holy (1-10): Gains a new affinity with a random law, the core begins to undergo a change.

Great Saint (1-10): Lifetime 1500 years.

Holy Divine (1-10) - Begins the path of divinity. The core ends the shift, it becomes a small world where it will store unlimited mana for later use.

Divine (1-10): Lifespan 3000 years. It uses the energy stored in the small world to expand the inner world, so it can be used to store things or carry people.

Great Divine (1-10): Lifespan of 6000 years. The inner world undergoes another expansion, and now you become God while you are in it.

Divine Master (1-10): Lifespan of 20,000 years. It is very difficult to reach this level, it is said that it is almost impossible.

Great Divine Master (1-10): Lifespan 1,000,000 years. Even today, you can count on your fingers how many have reached this level.

Pseudo God (1-10): Useful Life ???, benefits ???

God (1-10): Useful Life ???, benefits ???

Great God (1-10): Useful Life ???, benefits ???

Heavenly God (1-10): The ultimate level of the Multiverse. Lifetime ???, benefits ???]

(N/A: Will be available in the auxiliary chapter.)

[Skill Levels:

Every Skill starts at level 1 and goes up to 999, skills don't go along with cultivation, which means that if you're an Apprentice and have a level 999 skill, you can kill a Celestial God if he defends himself with a level 998 skill, for example. Always raise the skill level, never leave it for later.

An ability that reached level 999 will create the corresponding affinity and immunity, the same happens in reverse, that is, if an affinity was raised to level 999, it will create an ability, and also immunity.

There are some ways to gain skill/affinity/immunity, that is, buying the skill roulette coupon at the store, reading a book about a certain skill or being exposed to it.]

[Any element- or technique-based skills will not necessarily be the ones you acquire. For example, a man has given you an ice-based technique that uses sword, but the skill you will gain is 'Ice', just like you gained the skill 'Wind'. The more levels you move up the skill, the more you will have knowledge about it.]

"This is really useful, so let me upgrade my skills..." With that, Alex was adding skill points to his 'Wind' skill, and with each level up, more and more knowledge entered his memory about how to use the wind .

"This is tiring... System, upgrade all my skills to level 999, and the ones that come later too."

[Done.]

All of a sudden, a flood of information about how to use his abilities arrived in his brain. And then he passed out.

A few hours later, Alex woke up and looked around confused, but soon the information about how to use his abilities came back, but now it was different, he knew perfectly how to use his abilities, the impression he gave was that he spent years using these abilities. What's more, the system didn't inform you that when a skill reaches level 999, it doesn't need to use mana, the element itself does what it asks for.

"Status."

[Name: Alex Mars (Don't mind his last name)

Age: 25 years old

Cultivation: Has not started.

Abilities: Wind (999), Gravity (999), Space (999). (N/A: O (1+) means the skill is at level 1 and level up)

Affinity: Wind (999), Gravity (999), Space (999).

Immunity: Wind (999), Gravity (999), Space (999)

(N/A: Affinity and Immunity bars will not appear next time, as whenever he gains a new ability he will level it to 999, resulting in Affinity and Immunity.)

Skill Points: Unlimited

Energy Points: 0 (To use in the shop.)]

Alex can't help but be happy with what he saw. He then consented to feel the wind, and in that, he felt the whole Multiverse, if there is wind, he felt it.

"I see, there are inhabited planets in this universe, but there are also fictional universes... How interesting." With that, Alex took out his cell phone and texted his boss.

(N/A: Text messages will be represented with ><)

>Dear boss, I resign.<

"Pretty simple, now let's go for a walk."


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