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If you had one chance to choose an ability what would one choose? My answer was simple. "World Travel."

General Audiences

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Rank -- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง
Stone -- หินพลัง

คุณอาจชอบ

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  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
  • การดำเนินเรื่อง
  • กาสร้างตัวละคร
  • พื้นหลังโลก

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Yuri_is_Ntr

Well,first of all,I enjoed reading this and really like mindset of mc and how realistic he is.On the other hand,there is too much his monologue and they repetitive....Mc is smart-yes,he understand he's own flaws-that's good and all,but you see,it's do nothing to him and most of a time he staying indecisive about what to do.Don't even mentioned how low-key and small his precence to others.He have no goal,no hobby,no interest and even more no precence towards others characters.Yeah and breaking 4 walls in his though,how original.... Anyway,most of my concern,that it lacks anything intresting besides power/traits,not even other characters can't do a bat sh*t intresting.And I don't even know if something going to change in his wicky-wacky way of living....Just want to say,even if he is you everyday joe from a school,that a little bit smarter than average,doesn't mean he is intresting... Well in a conclusion,I have a feeling that it either be dropped and forgotten not even 30 chapters in future,or no one gonna read it.But still will looking forward for a hopefull,better future,so good luck.

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Pingviini

The writing is overall good, but the skill descriptions get little confusing at times. The character is pretty interesting, if a little worrying at times being so callous, but I suppose hes just that kind of person. Decent and pretty interesting story.

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Gilgamesh_

I recommend people to read it i think its fun and interesting Hope mc gets a bit smarter with the people that is surrounding him Overall its funny intersting and something new

5yr
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Ctrl_C_Ctrl_V

Its good, MC’s smart and his strong. I have trouble keeping track of his abilities though and i dont remember how most of his abilities work after each chapter( my memory is ****)........BUT ITS GOOD SO WHO CARES

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APieceOfToast

Holy crap. Can I just say how impressed I am with this novel despite it only having 6 chapters. A lot. My god I love this Idea and the protagonist AND my favorite part is the protagonist is NOT I repeat NOT an idiot. Its hard to write a genius character when one is not a genius themselves but this story nailed it so far. Im impressed.

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Aria_Ruinz

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