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Demon in the Human World

Fantasy 185 ตอน 439.9K จำนวนคนดู
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"Why did you kiss me?" Mingmei asked.

"What?" Xuan exclaimed when Mingmei threw a punch at him but he caught her fist.

Xuan slightly smiled and said, "I do not want to get a hit on my face without any reason. Earlier you came to my house and confessed to me your feelings. Now, you came again with a new excuse." Mingmei used her other free hand and then directed it towards Xuan's face but he caught it too.

Mingmei glared at him and pulled it back when Xuan with one swift movement put her hands behind her back and then pulled her towards him. In those dim lights, she saw something weird as if Xuan's eyes were purple. "Do not make me lose control," whispered Xuan against her lips. 

"Wh- what?" mumbled Mingmei when Xuan crashed her lips onto hers.

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In the demon world, the young master Xuan Hao is regarded as the most respected and powerful being. Since the age of 13, the man showed his extraordinary skills and conquered many territories.

One day the father of Xuan Hao told him that he has to go to the Human world where he has to find a person from their world and he has a time of one year for this task.

Hardly Xuan Hao knew that going to the human world will make him lose his power; the might which he has in his world he would've never agreed to his father.

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The story that I want to create is not some typical Demon who only avenge but it is about how Demons and Angels protect the Earth.

The Demon which I depicted in the story is an innocent type who only knows one thing: 'that is to fulfill his duties'. But when he comes to the Earth to solve a problem he falls for a woman who is his lover from the past.

Despite his prophecy, he decides to help the woman who helped him when he came to the Earth with no powers. He starts loving her and eventually the story begins.

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The cover photo is taken from Pinterest so the copyrights go to the picture's truthful owner.

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    _midnightsunshine_

    I thought demons would be bad and all...but this story 😍 in love with Xuan and all the other characters...a little bit of hiccups in grammar are there but otherwise it’s such an interesting read with a quirky MC who is impossible not to like...

    4yr
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    sweeter_than_u

    interesting concept, you have a way of telling a story that makes your readers fell in love with your characters. Some grammar mistakes in there but it doesn't hinder much with the reading experience. [img=recommend]

    4yr
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    Zhangyenumberone

    This story reminds me if the Kdrama called habaek bride? I for got the name but it was about a man who is the the god of water and when he entered the the human realm he lost his powers and Etc. the difference is that the female lead is supposed to be the remaining divine spirit. anyways this story really reminds me of it so i really like this story.

    3yr
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    Rika_67

    Loved the story author. More updates and chapters please............ Keep it up Author.............................. ................................ ....................... ........

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    4yr
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    Geminiman_Sam

    I love this story. It's like a different demon world unlike explained in most of the other novels. Since only two chapters are released so I'm looking forward where's the story goes. Keep it up author.......

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    4yr
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    Rika_67

    I loved the story..............more updates author and keep updating.................... ................................ .................... .............

    4yr
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    The_Procrastinator

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    4yr
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    Rein_U

    Interesting plot author. The protagonist has no powers and with his unknown identity he has to find the things. I loved the way other characters are introduced. Keep up with your work author......

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    4yr
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    Zone_out

    Since there are only a few chapters so I'm giving review on the basis of that. I enjoyed reading the chapters. The storyline is quite interesting. More chapters author and keep updating

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    4yr
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    MoeJam90

    Strong introduction of the main character. Nice character interaction.A novel you can look forward to. Although, I would really recommend you to practice your sentence building more for a cohesive interaction.

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    4yr
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    ShadowPrincess96

    To be honest I am a big fan of this cute author❤️ And fantasy is my always loved genre! And this story has a complete unique plot along with storyline, that's why everyone should give it a read! I loved the summary and the chapters I read and Gongzhu is my obviously favourite character (U know what I mean😎🤭😉) More power to you, keep it up honey❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    4yr
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    sillymlk

    First of all...I love the concept. When I opened the authors profile (cause I'm a stalker) I was hooked by this story just by its summary. Fantasy has always been my favorite genre, and I know how hard it is to deliver it properly. But this author never fails to entertain me with her chapters... From liking Xuan to liking the crazy interactions he had initially when he came to human world😍😂🤣.. man I had a good laugh.. But most importantly I fell for the chatecter who resembled me so much (nope not revealing who). I literally jump and blush when I read their interactions... I love this book author, and I love the way you tell your stories. Keep publishing more 🙈🙈🙈

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    4yr
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    shortmotor

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    4yr
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    4yr
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    4yr
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    shortmotor

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    4yr
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    spicyscribbles

    I really like the idea of an all powerful being losing their power and having to learn how to live like a normal person. The story is developing at a smooth pace, which is nice. One way the story could be improved is if the author took the time to "show" us more scenes rather than just describing them. There are also some grammar issues such as wrong punctuation and fluctuating verb tenses that need addressing, but it's not a huge deal. I think it would be pretty cool if the characters had some more substance, because though their interactions are interesting, all of them feel a little flat. In summary, this book has a really interesting concept and, if certain issues are addressed, has a bright future. Best of luck to the author and keep up the good work :D

    4yr
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    Dawn_in_dark

    This story is interesting and I'm sure I'm going to have great fun in this novel. It's characters are good alongwith story plot. I recommend reader to read it. Good job dear author. Keep updating new chapters regularly 😁😁

    4yr
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    Nicole_99

    An interesting story depicting a demon general(from what I understood), who finally came back to his home, only to be sent on another journey yet again. It's intriguing to see how Xuan will hold himself when he is sent to Earth without any of his powers. Real interesting work! The language is relatively good, considering its probably not your first language. This is a great effort considering the fact, keep it up!☺

    4yr
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