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บท 1: The Beginning

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Ed was really frustrated because he was floating on the endless space/void for 10,000... at first he is so exited because its like the situation where he gets to be reincarnated like novels he read

(He is a proud shut-in otaku btw) but when the one he was expecting didn't appear, he gets to feel bored, lonely, worried, sometimes he was crying because he miss his family😭😭😢😦.

(Ed): goddddd, where are you???, if theres really a god please hear my prayer, please get me out of here, im sick of this place, are you punishing me??? What the hell did i do in my life that you give me this suffering, 😢😭😢 i didn't deserve this im just a PROUD SHUT-IN OTAKU. Whyyy??

Wu wu wu wu 😢😢

^God hear his prayer^

(God thoughts): hmmm? Ohhh no, how the hell did i forget him here..!!

"One minute after the MC died"

God was in a bar flirting with other female gods. And he suddenly felt something.

(God thoughts): weird, why there's a mortal in my domain??

Ohh well im sorry, lets leave him there. Beside theres no way he'll survive there.

(God): hehehe im coming girlsss. 😍😍😍

"10,000 year later"

There's person like-light coming toward him

(Ed): God, why youre so late, 😢😢 im waiting here for so long yet you didn't come!!!!

Ed put a brave face and confront god...

(God): son, im very very sorry. I forgot that you are here because (oh well, lets lie. Theres no way, ill tell him that im flirting with girls while hes suffering) i was so busy of (flirting with other girls)my work and i forgot youre here..

(Ed): God????? Are you the god??

(Ed thoughts): hmmmm why i feel that hes lying to me?? 🤔🤔 nevermind lets just what hes gonna say.

He didn't know that god was listening to his thoughts

God gulp and drop cold sweat but Ed didn't notice because god was very good at acting.

(God thoughts): ohh shit, im going to live hell if this going is going get through to Almight ears!! 😫😫😫.... lets just reincarnate him to his favorite anime and give him 1 wish, hmmmm (he thought if Almighty hears this😈😈😈) shit, ok ok lets give him 3 wish... fuck you mortal you've waste my 1 century pay 😡😠😡..

(Ed):  so god what im gonna do now?? Are you going to check my karma and judge where i go heaven, hell or reincarnation (Ed lit up his eyes) like those novels???

God acting like a intimidating man

(God): cough cough... I WILL REINCARNATE YOU BECAUSE (I was afraid of Almighty god) OF YOUR SUFFERING FOR 10,000 YEAR AND I WILL GIVE 3 WISH..... NOW STATE YOUR WISH.

Our mc was thinking what was he gonna wish

1 hours.

2 hours.

3 hours ....

10 hours.

God was beginning to run out of patience.... and his face began twitching....😁😁

(God thought): Bastardddddd 😠😠😠, fasterrrr.... 😡😡😡.

(Ed thought): buwahahahaha  thats my revenge on you for leaving me here for so long..!!

God admit defeat

(God) :Tsk Tsk you win, ok now state your wish..!!

(Ed): hmmmmmm i want to be reincarnated to my favorite anime [ONE PIECE] and*

Wishes:

1st:: I wish to have a limitless potential for my body and swordmanship..

"Last Life"

*Ed was a avid fan of swordmans and when he is a kid he was gifted by his parent a toy sword and its always there with him even when he sleeps.. (hehe ofcourse he didn't bring it if he is  the bathroom and shower time) ...*

2nd:: i wish to have a handsome face and of course aura of charm for my crew but aura of intimidation if it is a enemy.

"Last life"

*Ed has a very average face, with no presense at all... even if he stood at center of the crowd there not many people who can notice him.. thats why he was a Proud shut-in otaku.. there he gets to feel several feeling he didn't feel outside..*

3rd:: I want a Interface where i can see my status, inventory, skills, and its skill progress.

Thats all.....

(God thoughts): Wowww, there not many mortal like him who's not greedy.. i thought he will wish like Instant mastery, System with unlimited shop points or something OP..

Well, i will give him something that will help him to his journey..

(God): Ok, there you go.. Kaboomm.. i wish you good luck.. 😉😉

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