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เขียนรีวิวHonestly this feels like a machine translated novel. Lots of mistakes and I don’t really think the story is that interesting rn. I think it has some potential so I’m not gonna give it a bad review.
author why did you not put harem when like majority of characters in genshin is females like literally if you dont want harem find another fiction that is suitable to be a non harem not this one
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Some of the Grammar are wrong and also it's makes me confused of them. And especially the Mc is kinda pathetic and also weak minded like a mind of a kid year old.
I hope this story is as interesting as the Honaki shadow Fanfic. Good to see you join the Authors
Unfortunately I put the work in the wrong place, I appreciate constructive criticism, and tip, English is not my first language, I use a translator.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์I never knew that you also had a book in writing. Discovering this has been quite a pleasant surprise. As a sincere apology, here's a five-star review.
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is this the remake version? Snannsjasnhwhssnsnsnsnsnshdhsjdjdjdjdjdjsjsjdjsjsjsjsjsjsjejejejejejejejsjdjejejdjdjdjdjdjejejejejejekkkjjjjjjjjjwjsjsjsndndndjdj
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rating this 5 stars since there's someone who gave low rating just because it's non harem (sorry for my grammar)