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(Going to be slow releases the week of 2/24 - 3/1. Slightly unwell and working all day Mon-Fri, so only expecting one chapter / 2 days)
Ivan Storme was once a billionaire, a man who ruled with money. His company operated in all sectors across Earth and was publicly renowned. However, Ivan had built most of his power with shady and illegal means, often conducting inhumane actions for the sake of profit. When this information was discovered and released to the public, he was forced to flee or face a life sentence behind bars.
With all of his past accomplishments and fortune crumbling before him and with no path of survival in front of him, Ivan took desperate measures to escape pursuit. He contacted an illegal human experimentation facility and paid all the money he had on hand to be cryogenically frozen in stasis for 200 years when the technology to revive someone from such a state existed.
When he woke up from stasis and was expecting a new life in a highly developed world filled with flying cars and holographic projections, instead he woke up to an unfamiliar environment in a completely different galaxy..
Ivan was sure of only one thing. The time he slept for was definitely not 200 years.
From the author: This has been on my mind for a long time so I have decided to put pen to paper, metaphorically. I'm currently doing an average 7ch/week + extras as I like, I will update this of any changes.
P.S. I don't proofread or edit. Doing so annoys me far more than you would be reading it. It's pretty clean already so for any typos, treat them as me testing your adaptability. ^.^
Comment any major errors and thou shalt be fixed
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I love it !!!!! I never logged in when reading other novels here, but i did now just to comment on how much i love this new novel ..Why? because this is true sci-fi !! (aside from the "fox-people" and the like for cuteness effect) the brilliant writer took real scientific principles and constructed a very convincing , rock solid, underlying platform of which the story is built upon. Also, it is abundantly clear that the writer has a very solid understanding in physics and biology, as he effortlessly (or thoughtfully) explained complicated theories and hypotheses with easy-to-understand metaphors and examples, and even used the MC to argue back and forth to clear misconceptions and account for opposing views, plot holes or contradictions ... this guy doesn't take the easy road or gloss-over things. I tried to find any previous works by the author but didn't find any :( .. Anyway, i'm looking forward in anticipation to read the following chapters (specially the exploration of the 4th dimension subspace) , PLEASE don't drop it or slow down .. i'm now joining the f5 sect.
This is an original take on the sci-fi world, so I'm expecting innovative ideas and plots as the start of the story till now surpassed my expectations and I hope it will continue to do so. The side-characters are still on surface-level depth, but I can see many ways the author can/will increase said depth. I appreciate the effort that have been put into thus novel and hope the author to continue this story till its completion.
Let's start:~ Grammar: I'm not going speak much about this point since I'm not from a native from a country that have English as main language and learned it informally on my own in the internet,but I guess it's pretty good english and author knows how breaks the texts and use . And , xD >-----< Story: definitely a uncommon history in midsts of reincarnation as X, system and cultivation cliches,it's a interesting history that have a lot of potential and hopes that author don't try hasten the history since the actual history pace is good and author did his research on sci-fi histories to make his own,that actually a good job man not many authors actually do it *thumbs up* >----< Characters: I liked the the MC's, i found your way to make Ivan knows shits after being awake at slot time kind kinda smart,since you avoided a lot of time and efforts writing it,*little spoiler ahead* but I found a small hole in the plot,in the church that he was capturing the turtles and got trashed btly female turtle charge,he did a bad decision,but if you consider that he have a memory from a captain ranked person even in atlast subconsciously,he should know atlast a basic military hand to hand combat form,even if he can't put it to actually fight,he should know that just jump to side would be a dumb ideia(he should had done what he did at second charge from beginning). >-----< Overall review: a very good written story with a lot of potential,keep going author, and please don't make the Ivan,dense as diamond when comes to woman and much less p*say like no characters I beg you :)
Hello! I really like this novel. It is a hidden gem in the rough. You have good grammar, world building and story development. I will be waiting for the next chapters!
I like where the story is going and concept, so far (at chapter 17),although it felt pretty rushed in the beginning, I liked it because it wasn’t a massive info dump and I like to learn more about the world as the story progresses. Tiny spelling and grammar mistakes that’s easy to not care about. Other than that keep it up!
can't put it into words but... if I were to rate it 1-10 it's 6/10 ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I was originally hesitant in reading this novel but I'm highly grateful that I did since I've grown to greatly enjoy this story and I'm looking forward to where all it will grow from here lol. The description of the MC originally turned me off with the cliche of the arrogant world domination type with complete disrespect for human life... But for the life of me, I just can't seem to hate him lol. Yes, at the beginning of the story the character seemed mostly Blank and one dimensional on the emotional spectrum to me... With his anger and frustration towards things not going exactly his way and his lack of remorse/empathy... Aka Few other emotions other than the narcissistically self centered ones... But this kind of fits since most CEOs of big industries (including some lawyers and surgeons) today seem to have a kind of psychopathy where they tend to seek control (over both self and others), are extremely calculating, tend to be a bit emotionally detached from morality, and also easily blend into society. As the story progressed he seems to have grown more empathy, his own branch of kindness, and understanding of the world around him that is all his own lol. But what I personally LOVE about this story { other than the MC's personal (forced) growth as a character} is the exploration aspect of this story. The growing into a brand new realm of existence, the growing of a company (future country?/empire), and (to a certain extent) the growing of an inner circle with a sense of family. (Though the MC will Defiantly Deny this until he officially admits it too himself... Which Probably won't be for at Least a few millennia or so depending on the plot line lol). YES he's Still the cold blooded protagonist that we were first introduced to but he's also tempered in certain aspects by his forced evolution both in mind and body. I'm also interested to see what other evolutions occur, what kind of businesses are produced/created, and what kind of adventures they get into in their search for expansionistic control that our fledgling CEO is going to create lol. I'm also interested in the technological aspect of this story and how they'll best utilize their new land to their best capabilities lol. My current frustration is that there aren't enough chapters to satisfy my hunger for this story lol.
Star trek on steroids. If you like star trek and the tech jargon and killing aliens read this. This is the most suprising and no cliche story here. A must read if you like scyfy.
Writing: 5 Very good writing. Author did research on terms and the grammar is excellent. Descriptions are not left to imagination and all flows smoothly. Updates: 5 Only just picked this up and judging from how recently this begun, anticipating a good long run of reading before it goes the way of qidian. Story Dev'p: 6 Only at the 3rd chapter and already thoroughly enjoying the plot elements suggested. He is an antique from a world long dead. There are no plot elements telegraphed. Instead, just from the world building, you know what will happen will never come out from the void and yet are guaranteed the set-up will be enjoyable. Example: MC has just met and agreed to a deal with what seems to be a dangerous bio-geneticist. The plot arc deals with obtaining genetic material from a nature preserve and there seems to be no incongruity with the idea of using a fossil as a partner in this. Political intrigue is high but subtly layered. Seriously anticipating this line of development. Char design: 5 We know the MC is somewhat amoral and I would perhaps term him chaotic good? chaotic neutral? In any case, from the outset his character has been defined so we know his actions are predicated by the role set for him rather than whimsy. So far, the author has maintained fidelity on this aspect to the story. World Building: 5 Going good! It is a sci-fi world and for once, the sci-fi elements are not buried under some mystical nonsense that makes you wonder why the tags for the book were off. Full descriptions yet not inserted as info-dumps. This is a very good start and should it be maintained, deserving of recommendation and support from the reader community.
Wow. Just wow. It's original and engaging in a way I never would've thought possible on this app. The main characters have layered personalities and goals, and the plot is unconventional. Nothing feels rushed or half assed, and despite me personally not being well-versed in a lot of the science fiction topics discussed in the novel, It's easy to see that a lot of time and effort was put into this story. Seriously, author, this app doesn't deserve you, but I hope you'll continue this forever.
I have deleted my original review after the author made some (in my opinion) much needed changes to the story. I have left my old review below for posterity but I will quickly comment on the changes. The author has addressed the most frustrating of the concerns. I now see what he was original trying to setup but I feel like the new way he accomplished this is much better. I am not super happy with the time travel (personally I hate time travel plots) but I like that the author made it have huge negative penalties that make it unfeasible for rampant story use. Overall I am once again excited to see where this story goes. ---- OLD REVIEW I was enjoying this but the latest couple chapters have had it take a turn for the worse. Minor spoilers may be ahead. First though, the story is well written and interesting. I think it suffers from a slight lack of direction on the part of the author. He seems to be constantly bouncing around between genres. When he settles on a specific genre/core idea to the story he doesn't stay there long enough to develop it. Now as for why things have taken a turn for the worse in the latest 2 chapters (marked as 26 and 27), one of the more important side characters was kidnapped and they are using this to try and force the MC to do something. First of all this is one of the most annoying tropes that exist. Not only does it remove a character that is important to the story from the story (for an undetermined period of time), it also forces all current ongoing plot points to come to a halt if the main character responds to it (which of course he will). In addition there are a few issues with how kidnapping happened. First of all you have to understand that one of the main characters is THE premier scientist in the entire civilization. In fact this whole kidnapping was supposedly prompted by their need to force the scientist to help them in a war they are fighting (as said by the leader who ordered the search for them!). The need for his knowledge is immediately contradicted when the soldiers who came for them use a weapon that the scientist doesn't even understand or believe possible. Not only that, but the main character is given a message that contains information that should be impossible for the sender to know. This implies some sort of deus ex machina level plot element. Potential "gotchas" include time travel (which sucks), the ability to see the future (also sucks), some all powerful being, etc... Super frustrating for the reader.
First chapter and I'm already hooked! I need more. This deserves a lot of power stones! Thanks for not being the usual Chinese cultivation ****!
Good novel. Great concept of science used here. All the difficult terms are explained. A good read for sci-fi lovers. I would recommend it.
I was originally hesitant in reading this novel but I'm highly grateful that I did since I've grown to greatly enjoy this story and I'm looking forward to where all it will grow from here lol. The description of the MC originally turned me off with the cliche of the arrogant world domination type with complete disrespect for human life... But for the life of me, I just can't seem to hate him lol. Yes, at the beginning of the story the character seemed mostly Blank and one dimensional on the emotional spectrum to me... With his anger and frustration towards things not going exactly his way and his lack of remorse/empathy... Aka Few other emotions other than the narcissistically self centered ones... But this kind of fits since most CEOs of big industries (including some lawyers and surgeons) today seem to have a kind of psychopathy where they tend to seek control (over both self and others), are extremely calculating, tend to be a bit emotionally detached from morality, and also easily blend into society. As the story progressed he seems to have grown more empathy, his own branch of kindness, and understanding of the world around him that is all his own lol. But what I personally LOVE about this story { other than the MC's personal (forced) growth as a character} is the exploration aspect of this story. The growing into a brand new realm of existence, the growing of a company (future country?/empire), and (to a certain extent) the growing of an inner circle with a sense of family. (Though the MC will Defiantly Deny this until he officially admits it too himself... Which Probably won't be for at Least a few millennia or so depending on the plot line lol). YES he's Still the cold blooded protagonist that we were first introduced to but he's also tempered in certain aspects by his forced evolution both in mind and body. I'm also interested to see what other evolutions occur, what kind of businesses are produced/created, and what kind of adventures they get into in their search for expansionistic control that our fledgling CEO is going to create lol. I'm also interested in the technological aspect of this story and how they'll best utilize their new land to their best capabilities lol. My current frustration is that there aren't enough chapters to satisfy my hunger for this story lol.
Honestly one of the best sci-fi novels I have read here. Like top 3 level. THIS IS A MUST READ! 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters
Since the author and the others haven't written their review yet I will be the first HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
to anyone reading this review. just read the novel bro, worth the time. Fun read even though its been inactive for three years, hope author comes back
The storyline is really great. But the typo is too much. Try to do something about that. Fans of this story is waiting badly for it's continuation. Please stop making us wait...
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Man, this novel is awesome and I'm really looking forward to seeing how the story develops. In particular, I thought the author did a really good job explaining the concept of the 4th dimension, and seems well versed in science in general. I assume he has a background in physics, or he's just a really good BS'er. To summarize, I would definitely ask this novel to have my babies.