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An assassin girl reincarnated in One Piece World. She was born in One Piece's underworld. After years later, she was singing songs while floating on a piece of wood, and then she heard an excited voice ''Heey! You have a really nice voice! Are you a musician?!''
An OC story where she meets Luffy before whirlpool
OC a little bit of HarleyQuinn and Luffy mix
This story is also posted on Fanfiction.net by me.
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One of the best fanfic on webnovel imo. No room temperature IQ MC, no "got my 3 broken wishes" which are often disappointing, no system making the rest of the world irrelevant, OC with an actual story and being part of the world rather than a bystander with no attachment or purpose etc. Really looking forward what this story will become, only a few days old and already looking great
One of the best Fanfics I've read and I'm sad I have to wait for Moar cause I want Moar (ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻
I love it! It is one of the better fanfics I've read. The character integration and personality suit the one piece world. So far I enjoy where this story seems to be heading and look forward to every update. Please keep this story going!
This is the best one piece fanfiction that I have yet to read. The quality of it is very good. There is little grammar mistakes. Don't drop it.
I really enjoy this book. I hope it doesn't get dropped. the updating frequently is usually around 10-12 days tho it has been awhile. I do look forward to every new chapter. Here's to the author! Good luck and do your best!
someone to help with the writing and it's one of the best one piece fan fiction i've read. So keep up the good work and don''t worry about us
i almost thought you were doing a plagiarism if i didn't saw your name haha. gotta say i love this story, i hope your stoey can reach the war of the best. Luna and Luffy saving ace. also i've read this story on ff.net, not on this app
Can't say much about the story so all 3 Stars as I didn't get past the first chapter. What i can say is 1 Star for quality. This story sadly reads like mtl. Props for lengthy chapters and no word count chapter, but I can't enjoy reading this. I'd suggest grammarly and maybe brushing up on english a bit. I don't need or expect perfect quality in a fanfic, but it should at least be readable without correcting sentences in my head to read. Still i wish the Author all the best and thanks for sharing your story.
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when is the next update? its been more than half a month since you updated. hope to get more chapters soon.
I'm probably not going to read any of this story, but i wanted to explain why, the Grammer in this story along with the the writing is great, but its been put through google translate or something, if the author reads this then I'd recommend you put this through the Gramerly app(not sure if that's the correct spelling) or ask someone to proof read your story and repost it. In layman's terms you get your point and meaning across but are likely losing potential readers over aesthetics, rant over, you may continue with your day😁
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I really loved the character. She fits the world and the crew so well. You have some grammar mistakes but I dont care because the story is good. I’m waiting more, please keep up with it! 👍🏼👍🏼
One of the best fanfics i read from the section of One Piece on fanfiction, didn't know it was here too. Honestly, at this point is just nostalgia to read it again and again. It's been a long time.
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The writing style in this story is far better than the rest of the trash that the Webnovel is filled with. I swear whenever I try to read any story from this app, it's as if I'm reading a recently puberty hit child's rant, instead of a proper narration style. I'm especially glad that this is one those rare stories in which narration style is not completed in just mere dialogues with names preceding them, but properly visualising the scenerio and emotions of the character. Can't wait to see more from this story.