this story doesn't have many grammar errors but it's written very badly it's too fast paced and it lacks a base for the mc it feels like he is just there doing stuff for no reason and the justice league feels like a bunch of bot's just going along with whatever bs the mc comes up with
this story doesn't have many grammar errors but it's written very badly it's too fast paced and it lacks a base for the mc it feels like he is just there doing stuff for no reason and the justice league feels like a bunch of bot's just going along with whatever bs the mc comes up with