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Leo was always just enjoying life, whether it be playing games with friends, partying late at night, or dancing with a girl no one else would, he simply lived his life.
He couldn't call himself a good or bad person, simply being another human, but his own heroic action got him shot.
Did he learn to not be a hero? No, in fact when he suddenly woke up with a game-like system in front of his face, giving him a pistol that magically took enemies down, but didn't kill them? He decided he would become a superhero... Too bad he didn't notice that someone was watching, someone that he'd never thought he'd see outside a game he played once.
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Fair warning, I know almost nothing about DC, so anything you see that might not be canon during certain times, or anything that seems out of place where Leo is, is just me adding things. This novel is purely so I can get more comfortable with the setting, the people, and what they do, as I try to write a good enough interpretation for the characters Leo meets.
I am still doing some research while I write, but I will not be following any real 'Timeline.'
Leo does fuck, just not right way.
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Can't really say much about it yet but I see lots of potential. Writing is good, your character is still getting fleshed out, and there's a lot more to come. It's looking to be really good to be honest. Although many people won't like his reveal of the system, but it seems like the best thing he could've done, plus a system in DC isn't even that far fetched.To the people who will say its a bad idea, there's Shazaam who's just a kid who can turn super powerful by saying a magic word. Then there's rings that can make you potentially make you the strongest person on a planet depending on your emotions. Really a system isn't a lot in DC, especially when it revolves around guns. Otherwise this is a good idea. Good Job my guy, keep up the good work
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I usually don’t like to write reviews unless circumstances call for them. So far I’ve enjoyed reading this short but fun story. I would like to say as a warning and reminder that you shouldn’t let any hate or negative comments ruin your motivation to continue writing this book. Great job so far and I’ll update the rating later should you continue to update. I think that my rating is accurate given the current amount of chapters released(5).
Uma fanfic muito interessante, com um bom protagonista, com ótimas habilidades uma dinâmica de personagens interessante e eu gostei da personalidade de alguns coma a Raven. Good 👍🏽
I can't rate it yet, seeing as I haven't read it yet but it looks like the book will be epic
Absolutely fantastic the chapter is very devos and there's pretty unique and I'm so happy that it's not gonna be one of those I'm gonna. Go off the rails after this amount of time because I want to kill someone now. Because of this in the future so this is amazing he is perfect. I love his attitude. I love how he learns things like he is and hes not a stupid cocky brat. It's absolutely a great degree and then. World background is perfect. I don't care if this is a new Au. I like to say you quite a bit and I hardly see any Teen Titans. Shenanigans and any of these you know and any fan fiction and so I'm quite d*** happy that this is here like really good stuff and I do. Hope there'll be more chapters very soon because it's amazing and I hope author does not stop or drop. Because this is amazing and I hope you continue and have a great day
Though there have been only 18 chapters at the the time of this review & the story still hasn't expanded as of yet, it is safe to say the story is quite enjoyable & the characters though differing in personalty (slightly in some cases or majorly in others) & relationships, frankly, are NICE. For example: True to the word family the Bat Family feels more cohesive and lovable & Batman feels more relaxed which most hope of him/wish for him as a character & imagine the family as such. You could still see the classic Batman in him & he is not totally off track in personality. Overall the story till now has been great & addicting to read. Spoiler(kinda): The MC (or the story) does not currently have an overarching or main goal to achieve/follow and till now this feels like a slice of life story. Will the MC get one or the story will follow in this slice of life pace? Just a question I have for future reading expectations.
I usually don’t like it when an MC tells people about their system but you managed to make it enjoyable. Good work.