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so I've taken your guy's words into consideration and I'm going to be rewriting some chapters so now the synopsis for this is that
Jamall the main character MC cell is a fanboy of DBZ but he's always had this what if of what if so achieved Perfection sooner so that's what he's going to be doing while also making his own path in the DBZ world to be better than cell or the original cell
also to find my template what I'm building a lot of this off of it's Seeking Perfection by Logan SB it was made in 2018 so yeah I'm just putting my own spin on it
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เขียนรีวิวWith the name Jamal, I can’t take this story other than as a joke, and if you think like that, the story is not bad.It’s not very clear whether he wants to be a hero or an anti-hero
Till now the history is amazing! Hoping to see how would he react to future events like Majin Buu and also curious how the trigger for super saiyan 2 is gonna happen in this timeline.
Ta guapete la historia. Deberían de darle un vistazo, de las historias de #DragonBall actuales es una de las mejores. Pstt: no es china xd
Overall good just need to have a motivation on perfection since the Mc is obsessed with it plus with latest chapter I’m surprised the time patrollers haven’t done something yet anyways looking forward to new developments to the story keep it up![img=recommend]
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Im probably getting tired when reading this fic since everytime i read i hallucinate about cell's name turning into jamal
Mc: O-oh-ohhhw- Hey GanG I'm Jamal:). 😑<---- when I tell u this was everyone's reaction that paragraph...I swear.Bro is in cells body and he goes by....J-Ja-Jamall.... 😑..... Jamal: OhHh so your name is Veggy?:) 😑 bro met the z fighters and is acting like an 8 yr old who maxed our his roblox account and his hanging with the nubs in the lobby-...wtf is this sad attempt at a joke.Keep the story serious....for ur next viewers. Not a pleasure meeting you cell- my bad I meant..Ja-Ja-Jamal😑 corny as hell.
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Alright I tried and read up to the 5th chapter the MC is hell bent on not following any of Geros plans anyone which is good and great but it comes to the point where he doesn’t want to absorb 17 and 18 to which if he did could get a ultimate power up and get rid of his hunger I mean I never seen cell try to absorb anyone after he became perfect. Next this is the Future Trunks Timeline if you could even call it that the Androids are monsters killing people for entertainment and yet the mc nah let me team up with them the mc had a whole paragraph about not wanting to absorb humans cause he doesn’t like killing humans but would want to team up with killers who kill humans great. Oh yeah the randomness of the story like at one point he some how gets a Martian Man Hunter template some how with no explanation it justs there in the background and has used M.M.H. abilities twice phasing and invisibility plus their is a point in story where he meets the androids and 18 some how knows his real earth name but doesn’t get mentioned again and is brushed off like it didn’t happen and for some reason 17 and 18 have a human cult that they protect or something I don’t know didn’t read that much of it oh and ah Dr.Myuu is involved the dragon ball gt evil scientist yeah he is involved somewhere.