DBZ : Original Timeline Gohan

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OtherShore_Asura

Honestly, that last line with Not needing a System simply because he's Gohan just hit the feels man. Hopefully, it works out well in the future chapies and derail in to the mess most other DBZ fanfics make.

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GodCrimson

Well its lacking in in depth story and character dev, emotion etc. its good if you like to read db fanfic it should be. mc will be op and its just kinda smooth for him i don't like manuplating author its like whole world is trying to kill mc i dont like thag kind of story but this is kinda too smooth haha

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zen_garden

Great fanfic of Dragonball 🐉🎱 Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good. 🤪

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dankoku

Honestly amazing compared to other dragon ball fanfics. MC is put into Future Gohan a day after he died, a great premise. No lusting after every girl on sight like other fics, he's inherited gohan's personality and memories, and is able to hide his knowledge of the future well. Would recommend, 10/10.

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the_king0134

it's actually pretty good, i mean it's decent better than most would recommend

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Bolder_Folder

How DOES THIS BOOK HAVE SO LITTLE VIEWS??? PEOPLE YOUR MISSING OUT

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EditorBr0701

I read up to the most recent chapter (Chapter 32) and I say it's a great read, without boring systems or crazy tricks, just good old effort and use of logic, after all, if the MC already has all the knowledge of the plot the most the correct thing to do is to use it. So far 9/10, hope it stays that way, looking forward to more updates.

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InternetSaint

Far better than the rating would suggest. Which is strange.

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yrg_xarkly

Love it brother man !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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OVERKILL

starting was interesting. author had some Idea what he was doing. but just after a few chapters everything was superficial. Videl was introduced to soon. why ..??? .... --reincarnation, woke up as grown but weak Gohan, messed the original time line of dragon ball super without giving a single thought or mention. still weak compared to orginal Gohan at that time ( who could fight Buu) .no future plan . CHAPTERS WITHOUT TITLE my personal issue - i completely lost interest when Gohan told namakian dragon his wishes 😒. this was first time for him summoning a dragon since earth's one was destroyed. and he asked 1st immortality, 2nd don't remember, 3rd cordinate for planet Yardrate. ( planet namik's cordinates were hidden so he asked king kai for that but for Yardrate 😒).

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Lizrock

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Lizrock

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Lizrock

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Liquid_Ice

good at the start, it's been boring the last 20 or so chapters

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Lizrock

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Lizrock

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Lizrock

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Demon_Goetia

Bro, literalmente este tipo en el primer capítulo cumplió la promesa de Gohan antes de morir en manos de los androides: " Yo no moriré, no importa que mi cuerpo sea completamente destruido... Mis ganas de pelear me levantarán porque son muy grandes!"

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Lizrock

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Darkiling

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AlastorGF

Esto Tiene romance ? o nada ? ( Completando el minimo de palabras asi que ignora todo esto y sigue con tu vida , es enserio ignora esto no tiene nada que Le doy 0 estrellas a webnovel x esto :V )