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I do not own anything that is copywrited that is included in this fan-fiction. I will try to either update somewhere between once a day and twice a week.
Please for you critics out there don't hate post just because you don't like my writing. I am writing because I want to better myself not because I am a masochist that wants to beratted because his writing quality is subpar. For the rest of you I hope you enjoy the novel, please keep in mind that my descriptive writing isn't the best so bear with me, also if you cant quite picture what I am writing about then you can probobly find some kind of picture of the caracter online. Also I ask that the readers know at least some of the Devil May Cry story along with some of Highschool DxD. Other than that I hope you can enjoy my story.
There will be a harem, some willing, some not so much. But there will be one.
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เขียนรีวิวWell, the character is a generic(a bad copy of Dante) bland and boring. The grammar is not good, makes it difficult to understand, although my grammar is no big deal, even for me it was difficult to read this story. Instead of having only the original character in the dxd world he used a lot of elements from other stories, which "spoiled" the story in my opinion, not to mention that there is no development of the characters and the world.
Another bs fanfic had to bring all his characters enemies making him not special,gender bending, he should just stick to original from dxd ,that would make him special
if you like rias don't read this fan-fic,because this fan-fic really vilifies rias characters ... but the story is good although it's kind of annoying to see rias getting bullied here.. #this is my honest opinion about this fan-fic ..(*¯︶¯*)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์If i want to say i stop read in chapter 4 because i can't read. If you put space and make pharagraph it's good to read......................... ........................
I am honestly impressed by the way final fantasy and DMC are used in the story and I would like to see this continue and release chapters everyday in the future if possible, in my opinion I think I could go on for a long time with the concept. Thanks for a good read and I hope for more.
Ohh Kay first this started off cool you know with dante being the main character and all but took a complete 180° like i personally feel like this just turned into a fanfiction for the author’s sexual pleasure/kinks which i hope to god wasn’t the truth but it had such good potential but lost it DROPPED!
The author of this story must be a very, very sick individual. ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์นักเขียน Scarlet_Slayer
I really like this fan fic, since I haven't really seen a lot of dmc related stories which I kind of wish there was more. Anyway considering the past life of mc I think that a personality like Dante's is one of the best since dante no matter what pain he's been living with he still smiles and does what he thinks is right.
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