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Tian Yuan was a person who valued his honesty more than anything. He is a Highschool student who works as a part-timer for his living expenses and also for his studies, his parents died in a plane crash that happened when he was only 8. From then he relied on his grandfather for quite a while. but his fate is much worse after 4yearshis grandfather died of a mysterious illness. He became
lonely he could only rely on himself.
He came to Chan city for his future studies. he got himself a girlfriend and he also got a reason to work hard. but one day he receives an order of condoms to deliver to a hotel. he found out that the person who ordered was his girlfriend that has been cheating on him behind his back.
Was his luck always this bad? no! After breaking up with his girlfriend, he returned to his old house. on his way, he encountered a very fortunate chance for him to rise to the top.
After that his life began to change, he ended up becoming
a cultivator, School flowers to beautiful goddesses that can charm any man. One by one many women came to him.
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A very well made story with strong basis that look like a superhero back story. The story doesn't stop on one part for 10 million years snd gets right to the point. Good story :]
I think the author has enough experience reading stories about cultivation. Seeing the writing that I think flows smoothly without breaking the flow. Great start to the first chapter. Unfortunately, the chaotic chapter structure is either due to Webnovel's fault or the author's, making the reading experience less enjoyable. The use of uppercase and lowercase letters also affects the beginning of the paragraph and after the period. At least, webnovels have such a format. I've read it all the way to chapter five, and it seems like the author needs to really pay attention to the chapter structure which is really messed up. A good story doesn't seem interesting because of that kind of thing. It is deeply regretted.
I like the fact that the grades and cultivation levels are all conveniently listed at the start, that way, no one would get lost and even if they did, they could just go back to the first chapter. This is one basic thing that many cultivation writers tend to miss. Also, the story is great, of course it couldn't rival Super Gene or Vampire System but it's good all on its own. Great job author! Don't drop it, this is bound to come far :)
In the first few chapters aren't that good. but after the chapter 10 the story progress,the chapter 17 is the best way to put it. author keep it up
Today's chapter is better the then the last one in my opinion, well I liked the forbidden fruit part mostly. Yuan was excited from the excitement that his fantasy will nw became a reality
Best plot,good relationship, Overall Perfect !! Author please continue .. ... ...
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Great, the writing quality of this book is not too bad but some grammar mistakes can be seen, but the story is interesting to read, I am new to web novels but I am rooting for you!
The story is awesome, but not to sound judgemental... I would have liked it more if you didn't describe more on what was happening. Like if it was a cliffhanging blurb. Well,the book's all good all the way. Come try this out, guys!💖
I love the novel, the first few chapters were lacking but it got better[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is going great, the main character's background story was sad, though I hope fate compensates for it, I'm gonna stick to the story cause it's worth it.
Nice plot. Very believable story. Also some of your sentences are breaking into paragraphs. Maybe you could check that out. Anyway thanks for your review on mine
A very nice story. I like the pace of the story. you really got me hooked into his journey of cultivation. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer part more though. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A good start that was well-written and easily immerses in the readers. The plotline seems interesting as it progresses, drawing one's attention in. Good job!
The grammar has its issue but overall the story is great. I'd appreciate if the author improved his writing but apart from that am rooting for this book, added to my library.
dear author, the story is quite captive and a good deal of time. The story of high school students always got me. The ways his life changed after break up its interesting to read. keep it up dear.......
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