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I died, I spoke to god, my wishes were granted and I was reborn in the world of Naruto.
Follow the adventures of Max in the fantastic world of Naruto, and how it will unfold between political plots and wars.
The protagonist will be younger than Minato but older than Kakashi and the plot will begin before the third ninja war.
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-Slow pace history, also english is not my first language. Thank you for your support.
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It’s not that bad it just updates too slow to get into it if you update more and show more progress of the village development it will get more views
I read a few chapters. I won't comment on the writing because it's translated. What I like about the story is the concept of an entirely new village. Some wishes asked for were interesting, and some were mundane. Archery is unique. You don't see that in most novels. I generally do enjoy the overall vibe of the story. What I dislike most about the story is the dialogue. It's just monotonous, and it keeps going on and on. Unlike what the author wanted to accomplish, the story is fast-paced. It's one of those stories that have inappropriate flashbacks and time-skips. I also suspect the author has little knowledge of the Naruto world power levels. Overall, I will give this a 2.8/5.
This sucks this system basically spoon feeds the mc like i got no beef with system novels i actually quite liked them but what i hate is when they spoon feed the mc everything and the fact that it can even summon people just irks me even more like dont they ever get curious where they come from how they grew up but no they just existed poof like magic and they don't even question it not to mention they basically have undying loyalty to the mc like their people not undead in conclusion this novel basically sucks with how the system is spoon feeding the mc we could conclude that the mc will never get any character development in the future hays the only good fan fic where the mc actually creates his own ninja village is the novel "village hidden in ice" go read that instead of this trash