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4.35 (26 เรตติ้ง)
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"The only one who can beat me, is me."-Aomine probably
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เขียนรีวิวLost brain cells reading the first chapter idea is really cool but the execution is horrible your grammar needs work i would recomend using grammarly but yea good luck author
As a big fan of Classroom of the Elite series. This ff is right up my alley. Just don't drop Author. I'll read this to the very end----------
the story keeps flip flopping. it's like the author keeps changing his idea and didn't correct the previous chapters........................
18 chapters of frustration. There were some nice moments but... Mcs background is seriously clashing with his current character. So everythig he does is extra annoying. Also nothing really happend in this fic.
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4/3/3/3/5 = 3.6 It's enjoyable if you just reading fanfiction just to kill time. But not very good when you read it as Big fans of COTE or something, the MC has some inner energy so has supernatural power exclusive just for MC. The character basically just Aomine with logic and common sense.
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Hello, will this ff still be updated?? I'm really looking forward to this OP class 1-D set up... I hope you continue it author-san ... ... ...
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Hmmnnn…. This is not a great fanfiction for me. First, the mc is not cool. No matter how the author portrayed the mc as a cool person, it was simply tragic. Second, the monologue writing, the words, action. The flow of the plot is quite decent for the most part, its just when i read it, it does not give a sense of fulfillment. I read some amazing novel and fanfiction before this one, great and mature wordings, nice grammar, great plot, great twist and the last thing i want no romance. Which is why reading this gives me a downcast feeling and dissapointment. Anyway, better luck with your book. Hope you can bring something amazing for me to read. I stop reading after their introduction in the first day of highschool. I can’t take the cringeness when i read it….
Really a great fanfic, I see some comments complaining about grammar, but honestly, I don't care about grammar. As long as the story is good, I will always be interested in reading good fanfics like these (in my opinion). -Of course, as long as it's readable, I don't care about grammar, I'm reading it looking for a good story, not for grammar or language classes :v.
honestly the grammar started off pretty bad but it's better now (at least the whole thing was readable) the story has finally gotten to an important event involving classes (the island/camping test) and the Mc is subtly taking part in the class matters. My biggest problem is half the time I think this story is dropped as the author will post a chapter once every 9-12 days. I literally forget about this story half the time
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Good enjoyable read, but nothing amazing. MC fits perfectly in the environment, and feels unique in the cast. Good to see how he interacts with everybody. His inner energy is quite OP but it doesn't really matter while to story is mostly dealing with relationships. MC's interactions are what makes the story. Never read COTE but could feel when things slightly deviated from original. Nice read.
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I honestly love the story keep up the great work and please don't drop this Love that one stalker next door .
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Author here... There's many errors in the early chapters. Like grammars and etc. English is not my first language, there will be a lot of mistakes here and there... Romance will progress slowly, and don't expect harem...