BTTH: I have a key to travel to Wu Dong Qian Kun.

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Johanssen10

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Bisker_Islam

Is it original or translated? If it is translated, I want the original, please. I feel that the novel is good. -----------------------------------------______________________

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Chaos_Order8

Freaking finally another FF about martial universe I just hope it doesn't drop like the rest since I'm personally sick from Btth FF and Dulu something

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TDSD_1

Each chapter that passes gets worse, the author always chooses the easiest way to solve the problems, and ends up ruining the progression of the story. And what he did with Medusa is basically killing the character and creating a new one with the same appearance and powers. I'm still going to continue reading a few more chapters but I don't have any more expectations.

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a_otsuki

all the character are nerfed to beliving mc is right . geting dumb more u read . _________________________________________________________________________

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black1991

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Daoistr2b4NH

The writing feels really amateurish, as if the author doesn’t know where the story is coming from or going. There’s no sense of professionalism at all. How did the MC even know about the Soul Hall and Yao Lao? And Yao Lao doesn’t even question the MC’s intentions? It just doesn’t make sense—had to laugh at how ridiculous that was. Each chapter just gets worse. The author constantly takes the easy way out, ruining any potential for real character growth or story development. What he did with Medusa is honestly a disaster. It’s like he killed off the character and then slapped the same face and powers onto a totally different person. I’ll keep reading a few more chapters just to see where this mess is going, but honestly, I’m not expecting much at this point.

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cortez10

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Johanssen10

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ErickHenrique_BR

This soap opera is confusing, I don't know when he changes worlds, so it gets very confusing

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JohnnieWalker

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Javier_Graneros

El protagonista hace un buen uso de las cosas que deberían ayudar a los personajes de ambas historias, me gusta que a diferencia de otros fanfiction el protagonista no empezará a molestar a los protagonistas anteriores, muchos autores recurren a esto incluso cuando sus protagonistas no tienen ninguna problema de interés con estos personajes. Algo que encontré muy molesto en este fanfiction es que algunos personajes importantes parecen quedar olvidados en ciertos momentos de la historia, se suponen que estaban junto al protagonista pero no se los nombra y tampoco entiendo porque desaparecen de repente o donde están en esos momentos.

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Canserbero10

A good read with constant update. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]