บท 21: Hiatus/Rewrite

I hate to say it. I'm putting this in hiatus status. I was looking through my notes after vacation and realized I skipped over some stuff vital to the continuity of the storyline. The first 3-5 chapters shouldn't change but there will be some moving around of plot placements after those. I'm also going to rewrite it in a way it doesn't seem so hamfisted on some of the aspects I felt moved too fast.