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Beyond Critical (Multi-Cross DxD, Rosario Vampire, Ikki Tousen, More)
4.79 (37 เรตติ้ง)
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Kaito Evander wasn't anything special. He was smart, athletic and had great aspirations, but there was nothing truly special about him, even his Sacred Gear was a common Twice Critical. That was until the soul of his counterpart in another universe fused with his own and he gained...a second Twice Critical?(Insert)(Multi-cross) (Ikki Tousen, Uzaki-chan Wants To Hang Out, Rosario Vampire, Testament Of New Sister Devil)
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read upto chapter 31. The novel is pretty boring. its a DXD world where the powers of MC seems lack luster and not interesting. There is no buildup and climax in the story. Feels very boring to read also with the mixing of different anime feels very unpolished. Mixtures of different powers also feels clanky. Mostly feels like reading a story for muscle headed gym rat. Still gave a 5 star cause u know, if i give criticisms with low start it will get deleted by author.
A self-insert character that is hypocritical and unlikable? Check. A predictable plot, self-insert character bashing and stealing Issei's girls and making him into a cuckold? Check. The MC comes to Kuoh of all places instead of exploring the rest of the world and wasting potential plot ideas? Check. The MC with alpha male domination nonsense? Check. Unreliable updates? Check. The result is a one-star rating. It's a shame that I can't give zero stars.
5/5 for some scientific reasons 🥴🥴😏😏 Need more chapters and dont drop this or you know what’s gonna happen next 😃🔪🔪
What I like the most is that the story begins after the Riser arc, a good netori~ Keep up the good work this looks great potential like your other jobs that I'm already hooked on!
this is just for those of you that don't now where to read jords stuff go ff.live it's where he posts a lot this has like 100 /200 webnovel chapters on there same with most his books
One of the best FanFiction writers in the webnovel, unfortunately he is the one who leaves the most unfinished work. Every time Jordino appears, his stories are at the top of the Ranking.
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As someone who read the whole thing on FanFiction dot net, imma tell you why i like this so much despite it not being THAT different from above average fics: author got death threats so he doesn’t include any of Issei’s og harem in mc’s women, and in response author cooked up a legitimate, classic NTR arc for Issei where he beat his meat to Akeno getting railed
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In all it's a pretty good book not sure what the updates are like since i just started reading it. But if you like dxd then it should scratch an itch.
Author why did you drop your konosuba fic😭😭I’ve been craving it a lot these days
To tell you the truth I still didn’t start reading but I anticipated something good because I had followed a lot of your stories Plus when I see That this fiction is DXD😍 Rosario Vampire,🥺 Testament Of New Sister Devil🥰 I expect something good I hope you don’t disappoint me Especially that you disappear suddenly a lot I hope in the future you make a crossover multiverse fiction about Marvel + Dc+ Harry Potter
One of the only good DXD fics at the moment. Good writing, good pacing, good premise, good creativity and great update stability. Good job bro.
Keep it up. Great story. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
This is a very good story, but there are some pothole like the devil not finding they are fighting, but I like how MC had different way then getting reincarnated as devil. I love it thank you for hard work 👍👍👍👍👍
I've read some of your other fiction and this one is really good so I just wanted to you know give you five stars and I hope that you keep on posting for this fanfiction
Somehow, life always brings me back to you review box, my great nemesis.