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Name: Benjamin Stewart "Ben" Tennyson
Age: 21
Height: 6'2" (188 cm)
Appearance: Ben is a striking young man with a mix of light brown and black hair, light green eyes that seem to gleam with intelligence, and sharp, handsome features that make him stand out. His athletic build complements his martial arts prowess, giving him a confident yet approachable aura.

Background:
Ben’s life was marked by tragedy early on, as he became orphaned at a very young age. This forced him to grow up quickly, developing a fierce independence and work ethic. Despite his circumstances, Ben excelled academically, earning two master’s degrees in civil and mechanical engineering by the age of 16. Alongside his studies, he taught himself programming to support himself financially, becoming a highly skilled coder.

An avid martial arts enthusiast, Ben dedicated himself to training in various disciplines, achieving a black belt by the time he turned 18. His rigorous pursuit of knowledge and self-improvement shaped him into a highly disciplined and resourceful individual.

The Turning Point:
At 21, Ben’s life takes an extraordinary turn when he is inexplicably transported to the Marvel Universe in the year 2009. To his astonishment, he finds the Omnitrix, a device he idolized from one of his favorite childhood cartoons (Ben 10), strapped to his wrist. The Omnitrix gives him access to an array of alien abilities, but it also serves as a constant reminder of the dangers and responsibilities he now faces in this new and unpredictable world.

Response to the Marvel Universe:
Realizing the perilous nature of his new reality, Ben wastes no time preparing himself. Drawing on his engineering and programming expertise, he establishes a technology company to secure resources and influence, laying the foundation for his survival and future ambitions.

Simultaneously, he designs an intense training regimen inspired by Batman's methods from the DC Universe. Combining martial arts, physical conditioning, and strategic planning, Ben works tirelessly to hone his combat skills and tactical acumen. He recognizes that surviving in the Marvel Universe requires both intellect and strength, and he commits to excelling in both areas.

Personality:
Ben is pragmatic, intelligent, and fiercely determined. His hardships have taught him resilience and adaptability, and he carries himself with a quiet confidence. Despite his serious demeanor, he retains a deep sense of empathy, often showing compassion for those who are struggling. His dry wit and occasional sarcasm hint at a lighter side, revealing a young man who, despite his responsibilities, hasn’t lost touch with his humanity—or his inner child.

Character Bio

NAME:
Benjamin Alexander Stewart (Formerly)
Benjamin Stewart Tennyson

HOME WORLD
Earth 5554 (Formerly)
Earth 2000089

RESIDENTS:
New York Manhattan

AGE:
18 (time of story)

HEIGHT:
6 foot 1(1,88 meters)

OCCUPATION:
Superhero/ Vigilante
Mechanical Engineer/Civil engineering
Programmer (self-taught)
Entrepreneur

ABILITIES:
Enhanced Eidetic Memory
Freestyle Hand-To-Hand Combatant
Advance Marksmanship With Throwing Weapons
Spontaneous Learning/Understanding

EQUIPMENT:
Omnitrix (restored prototype)

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Mamamesta

A dumb and weak MC who is easily manipulated [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Huevo_Izquierdo

Manipulable protagonist with no backbone who literally assaults him and takes his things and he shows no sign of disgust or anger, simply pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

9mth
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Napstar_Craig2

Honestly Disappointing Most MCU and Ben 10 crossover just portray Ben as weak willed guy and depowering him more than he was in the original series. The fic started strong but the moment things got real the MC just folded........ But the author gave a note and some explanation about it so I will hold on my further judgement for this fic and give it a second chance. I really the author has some good reasoning.

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9mth
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Enlighted1

Mc just got attacked and contained in a cell and then he starts cooperating with them as nothing happened

8mth
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Majeh7

I am sorry I try to be positive but your making the MC a push over. if you didn't do that this story will be better if you fix it I am sure it will get more better reviews.

8mth
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TheAligatorFam

MC is a cuck, shield tranquilized him and locked him up, and he just got up and helped them, like what kind of brain dead MC is this? does the author have no self respect

8mth
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TrueFool

Dumb MC. Claims to be genius but gets easily bullied and threatened. Gets easily subdued by so called monkeys and got stripped naked . Very poor character and story development.

8mth
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Bull_7777

The MC is probably a bigger threat than the Hulk in this story and S.H.I.E.L.D. treats him as if he were a 5-year-old, very bad protagonist dumb and weak both physically and mentally

8mth
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Jhon_4525

I can't believe it's so hard to find a Ben 10 fic in marvel that's at least so-so, they're all bad and this is no exception, a very silly and manipulable protagonist who thinks he's a genius and is dumber than a rock

8mth
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Huevo_Izquierdo

I don't have to say what many have already expressed about this fic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

8mth
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KK9494

You are doing well, I can more or less get what you trying to convey form your writing but not all readers have the patience to understand the words. Try to flesh out the Mc's thoughts and emotions a bit. A sentence here and there. Trust me, it will work wonders. As for the progress of strength I am satisfied. The bashing is that Mc just made a Omake joke while Sheild assaulted him and made him uncounsiouss and literally tried to steal Omnitrix. So without, Ben's thoughts on matter, the scene will look he is a pushover.

8mth
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Z0HAIB

story was good until mc become a pushover.

6mth
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Chyzuri

its really good, keep going bro ....

8mth
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_wise
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I get Goosebumps every time, yeah, you come around, yeah

9mth
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Mmm_m24

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Shane_Delgado_03

Author here, just wanted to ask readers what are some of the expectations for this fanfic, and what are some elements that need improvement on. Should I make each chapter longer, or do you find the spacing slow. If so please leave a comment down below.

5d
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Nicolas_Eric

Continue, It looks like it's going to be really good .

2mth
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Flakeykoala807

I'm going to be honest I like this a lot dude keep going you got this man do not leave this behind you're doing all right dude I believe you're going to do good

5mth
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Sora_26

please I need more oh and I love your work I hope you have bright and wonderful life your fan from south Africa

8mth
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