Azazel Against The Gods™

LV 5

SadisticPrince

This is my very first novel- brought to life by my friends urging me to create a novel as a result of my role playing tendencies. Naturally, without the credibility and experience to back me up, I can't really give myself a 5 star. Anyhow, I will really appreciate it if you guys give me feedback on my writing and story as whole. With english not being my first language, It will be very helpful for there to be constructive criticism that will hopefully better my writing. Merci.

LV 6

Enlightened_Being

this is the stupidest novel I've read, transported in the world of ATG, dashingly handsome and to access his overpowered character the criteria has to be dashingly handsome, oh and hey when they meet Jasmine just tell her everything that the MC came from Earth and why he knows everything about her is because he read some sh*tty novel, that's basically it, the whole plot is so stupid that I'm speechless what to expect from this? have fun inside the novel which you have read? steal all the resources and grow stronger and do some stupid circus dance inside some sh*tty novel from Earth?.

LV 13

NewGoldie

I really hate when the author breaks the law of reality to be more clear I'm talking about( The Law of Reflection, The Law of Equilibrium, The Law of Verification). For example the law of verification, how can he verifies that he exists in reality when proving someone else reality is fiction when he is a fanfiction himself. You're trying to defend that lying to J@smine does not help in the long term when he himself living in a big fat lie, your lie. And By the way, one of the synonyms of fiction is a lie. what I'm saying is you break the immersion of the readers perspective. That why most of us readers drop this novel.

LV 12

Titanx328

This has to be my favorite against the gods fanfiction because it is really well written and thought out and please keep up the good work.

LV 5

faijay98

I just want to say that I loved the procces of the story really! Just please don't rushed the romance thing it would make the story-well It was really good that's it a good plot you have there.

LV 5

DemonKingVan

Great 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

LV 3

Adler9

Keep up the great story

LV 10

DarthVegito

First 10 chapters and I have to say this is one of the worst atg fanfics I have ever read..... people who voted 5/5 are either bots or just hoped that the story would get better and never changed their rating because this story is awful

LV 4

The_Paragon_White

🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😮😂😮😂😮😂😮😐😙🙄😑😚😍😂😐😪😑🙄😴😮😙🙄😴😐😯😑😇😅😙🎉😴😚😙😊😇😑😇🙂😚😥😮😘😇😂😍😚🎉😴😐🙄😐😚😂😮😙😙🙂☺️😍😉😄😆☺️😉😄😙😎😆😘😀☺️😄😉😄🤗😆😅😀☺️😕🤤🤧😖 😔😜😖

LV 11

Celestialic

Great fanfic. Good read while I wait for the original Raws to come through. Wished there was more. More than happy to spurge my SS on this fanfic.

LV 6

Haise99

can i ask you who is in the picture? 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌

LV 5

Icliptic_Horizon

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LV 6

Haise99

moreeeeee!!!! 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

LV 5

Stronda

Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌

LV 5

Bogdan2801

Great fan-fic story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!