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Ayanokouji in Shadow Slave

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4.26 (21 เรตติ้ง)

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It is as you think . Ayanokouji in Shadow Slave . To be clear this is an 15 y.o Kiyotaka who have not yet entered Tokyo ANHS and he is in his physical prime .

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Nike13K

Author tells the story in the form of flashbacks. He says, that something happened and recounts what happened, then an event in the present plays out, then time skip, then flashbacks, then another single thing happens, then another time skip. MFer took all the fun out of shadow slave. SS is good because of the interesting powers and the interactions the characters have, while barley surviving fighting horrors beyond human comprehension, but MC just casually can body awakened beasts and monster(which we get to read about in the form of flashbacks). MFer basically skipped the entire first arc of the forgotten shore. Like, why event WRITE starting from the nightmare and the academy if you are going to Speedrun till the castle? Just start AT the castle.

8mth
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AdhamElansary

The only flaw that I see is the rapid progress of the story and skipping the details and interactions between the characters in a deeper sense. Yes, you are trying to change Kiyotka, but give him some deep feelings. Thank you, and I will continue to support you.

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8mth
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ORDINARY_PERSON0

Nice idea , continue auther you can make it

8mth
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The_WheelOfFortune

The characters feel bland and emotionless, there’s not a lot of dialogue between characters.

8mth
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Knight61

İyi bir kitaba benziyor. Merak ettiğim şey nephis gene geride mi kalıcak yoksa ayanokoji onun yerini mi alıcak???????????????????????????????

8mth
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Jiri_Stehule

I honestly like this so far, new character provides with new perspective. there isn't much changes of overal story and believe you shouldn't expect it at least until later on. character is well integrated, his personality leaves with enough room for development and I'm eager to see new perspective and changes he will bring.

8mth
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Samizz

I really loved the idea for this work. the character dynamics are well put, logical progression but dialogues are a bit lacking. It is worrisome as you tend to skip arcs which can be justified as this is a fanfic but would love to see you. Hope you continue writing. Waiting for the updates. Great work.

8mth
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Yassin_Messaoudi_7669

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8mth
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Ba9ano

I admit that this masterpiece is the best Shadow Slave fanfiction *(Don't you dare stop him)* Go ahead and download more chapters if it doesn't threaten your safety

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8mth
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Lion_3641L

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8mth
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Doonie_Devourer

not gonna lie at first i thought i was not gonna like it but as i kept reading i got more interested this is a really good shadow slave fanfic Honestly, one the top, keep it up i love this

8mth
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Brainwashd

bro just rewrote the original novel. And what the author adds on his own makes other characters inferior and stereotyped, that is, he not only rewrote the plot, but also managed to make the characters no interesting and cardboard. Kiyotaka as a character does not bring anything new to the plot, and his mystery and other aspects that readers love him for are completely gone. Although, maybe the problem is in Kiyotaka himself and his maximum is to manipulate schoolchildren.

8mth
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greenmen

is much better thx Update great Story with lot Potenzial .

8mth
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Kline_Morrite

Apsolute peak 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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Kay_Smd

day 1 of requesting this novel to start bck releasing chapters

2mth
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Rustico
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It is good i hope you continue

2mth
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INDARA

Where are you Oh author this is the best fan I read for the novel Abdul Shadow continue 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😍😍

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3mth
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zed_kp

the story is progressing in a way that is too fast the conversation between characters is too left out i don't remember kiyotaka ever showing this much emotion but here he does without any efforts and it is quite shocking.

4mth
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Ahmed_Ragab_1983

dropped ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

6mth
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AxtonVlade

This is the current best shadow slave fanfiction. Consider doing a shadow slave fanfiction like Minato namikaze or satorou gojo getting reincarnated instead of akoyouji

8mth
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