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Awake on his bed

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When she wakes up, she felt that something is off. Her surrounding is unfamiliar and she felt a heavy object on her waist. She tried to move but she cant, it seems that it hugged her tightly. So she turn around to see what's that object was, but to her surprise she saw a handsome man that she doesn't know in her entire life! Then, she felt her body become sore especially down there. What the fudge!! and she's naked!!
Suddenly, the handsome man began to wake up and when he open his eyes, he said
"good morning babe, last night was amazing!"
and he smiled and winked at her.



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hello guys! Hope you like this story. :*
For those readers who never likes a story with smuts, I'm sorry but I'm kinda shameless! ahahaha and I'm sorry for the wrong grammars. Thank you! :* It's my firstime writing a story, so please try to understand. Thank you!

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innocent2

I really love this story, keep it up❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ please just be considerate we need mass release 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏,I love toby and Maria,can't wait till they fall madly in love with each other 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

5yr
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Yaski
LV 5 Badge

Its a good story but still needs some work, i love how the author is straight forward about the fact that he was her childhood friend and didn't strech it like the usual, i like how you portrayed their relationship and the story development is on an ok scale and its not too slow or too fast. Its a thubs up fro meh😆😆.

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5yr
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foodfighter

Interesting story line... romance.... it can draw ur mind till can't wait for new chapters... Lovely Maria and her boss... I love how this story is going....

5yr
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StephKong

Interesting read!!!! Hop on if you have a thing for funny romantic love!!! May not be suitable for young readers because of the explicit contents but the story line is getting interesting~ Hopefully more updates soon!! Thank you author!!!

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Foxy_Jovy

Hi author. I'm fans of transmigration, ancient China, Harlem, revenge & etc. Glad you decided to write something 'smut'. Looking forward for more updates then will change the review. Will vote for you when you have more chapters. Good luck!

5yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Enam25
LV 15 Badge

Am so in love with the book, it teaches us what to expect in life and what to take notice of when building up a "perfect" family. I hoping for more updates soon. Thank you

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4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Naveee4175

Awake on his bed , very beautiful romantic cute novel that I can say, I did added the novel the first time I saw from Webnovel , and i'm loving the Novel it's very enjoyable novel .

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5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
gracie2019

I don't like the story goes now **** ..too much complication Plus the chapter is too short .. but too ages before the next chapter ..what the 🙄

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
gracie2019

What's the delay .. been waiting for the next chapter .. feels like I been waiting for ages the next episode of a TV series weekly .. the chapter is not that long so why is the update is too poor

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mavic329

Good book to read and everyone will surely love this, I highly recommend this book for everyone to read and enjoy but please please hurry with the update.

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
gracie2019

I like the story so much .. guess to prolong the story that's why most of the point the writer choose the character of Tobias not to say something about his feeling and plan that ended into many misunderstanding and fight .

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
reader18372

... The characters are so f****d up 🙄 It started off right and it went on wrong. She's just a mere secretary and she dared to talk back to her boss... To the ONLY boss that dared to hire her. It's totally understandable why nobodyelse wants to hire her. Aside from being an undergraduate, which already most definitely puts her in a disadvantage, she also lacks professionalism. She's also veeeerryy prideful for a reason I don't know and can't comprehend. Gosh. It's alright being unable to finish your degree but work is also a matter of attitude. She even dares to skip work for a very personal whim and reason. No wonder nobody wanted to hire her. Gosh. The male lead is also sooooo f****d up. My god. Even worse... No... He's the worst. Man whore - the most appropriate description for that person. My goodness. He actually cheated on his girlfriend - the girlfriend he agreed to marry. He cheated on his girl when he slept with the main girl, with him having full consciousness to boot. And he also only agreed to marry his girlfriend because of lust. And, when he was keeping the main girl, he still kept his girlfriend. Like, what the ****. My god. Totally a man whore. No offense, but this is just my review. 😅 The prologue was definitely great. It provided a significant impact on the readers, making us want to read more. But that's all there is to it. The fact that they were the so-called "childhood sweethearts" (which I totally cannot comprehend why they were even termed "sweethearts") was not even really significant that it impacted their lives in the moment. Just as I have stated earlier, it started off right but it progressed in the wrong direction. P.S. I'm not discouraging readers to read this, but I'm just saying this because the characters made me frustrated. If you want to read it, go ahead. What I'm saying is just my opinion, and basically, we all have different perspectives and preferences. P.P.S. If ever I have offended the author, I just want to say, I'm sorry. This is just my opinion but the prologue definitely had a great potential (and that's why I kept talking about it) but because of the characters who, so far, seemed to have no development, I just can't seem to love this story, as to what I have read up to the latest chapter. And, maybe, or most probably, in the long run, the story will develop into something great, something better. Wishing the author good luck, and keep it up with your advancements. I know it's hard work juggling many tasks together and I don't want you to feel discouraged. I was just stating my opinion. Hehe 😅

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5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
MimiSams

Made me curious to wait for upcoming chapter.. how pervert and somehow patience the main character Toby is! And how sly Maria HAHAHA Cant wait for next chaptersss.. mass release like totally lot of those pleaseeee

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
BTS_RM

Hey. This novel is awesomeee!!! Please Author update twice a day💙💙. Everything about this novel is great And the way the characters personality are being develop through our the story. Keep up the good job.😊😊And please update more often💙💙

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
moelake

Grabby grabby little hands, those are the pregnancy hormones at work, lol, the next update is going to be hot after the OB gives his go ahead to plenty pounding and screaming things. I can't wait

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Essy_Atoo

Interesting, captivating, lovely story and skillfully written. But update takes forever😣, author you are doing great but you can do better😊

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3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mandy_Calhoun

This is a really great read. Fair warning... you might get a little frustrated after chapter 60 but hang in there because it gets better later on. I’m not going to lie, I seriously wanted to smack the ML upside the head for his stupidity at times 🤣 It’s still a worthwhile read though and I can’t wait for the next update ❤️

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
nasco
LV 6 Badge

I really wish to finish this book,i need to know how it goes and flows till the end so author please update all the remaining chapters so that we can enjoy

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Osookew
LV 14 Badge

Loved this story but the updates are super slow... no updates for more than 2 months... 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😅😅🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣☺️🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Pearl_Mikado

This story is very nice and interesting Buh I feel like it lacking a little bit of twist. Other than that the story is worth reading and nice. Good job done author. Keep it up

5yr
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