Avatar: Mage of All Elements

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Alucard_7894

I don't like this fanfic. First of all, spoiler alert but I really don't think it's a spoiler since you will read in chapter 3 or 4 but just in case. MC life before transmigration was like a bad written movie ( bad father, bad mother I think, being poor, bullied and everything went wrong for him in life) He had a bad life and you think this things makes him smart but wait, he found a girl he like and date her but suprise surprise, she cheated on him, I'm mean I still didn't read it completely but I knew this was going to happen. Now after the transmigration he have a mother that is the south tribe princess but but she was captured by fire nation and then r*ped and then she was able to escape after killing the guards, MC was born because of that r*pe. And the last thing, bending is called magic and I read his mother create water out of air, also for some reason he can learn other bending too even though he is not the avatar and he doesn't have anything special. Some of you may like but I don't and it's not because it's dark or something like that, I have read fanfics that MC get r*ped or get tortured or both. It's seem author went out of his way to make them so miserable. Also I might be wrong about things like bending and magic and MC powers.

LV 12

Sageofinfintypaths

this looks really interesting ,I just wanna know if there's Yuri or no Yuri in it

Great start *********************************************************************************************************************************************

A good start to the story, I hope you will finish it without giving up on this fanfic. Yes, the story has shortcomings, mistakes, it is not perfect, as is everything in this world. Keep up the good work, I wish you inspiration and good health

LV 10

Pedro_H_wieczorek

Tava indo tudo bem ate ele sofrer o nerf mais idiota possivel, cara chega a ser triste um negocio desse[img=bravo][img=bravo][img=bravo][img=bravo][img=bravo][img=bravo]

LV 1

Beniss

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Love it. One suggestion though, Please add quotations for the dialog. It's a little confusing when you use the arrows.

Looking forward to the future of this story. I'm excited to continue an avatar fic. Keep up the good work!

I like this mc he's kinda weird but in a freaky weirdo way 😄‼️.........................................................................................

Great job! Please continue![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Man the starting is so good but gets little boring sometimes. ______________________________________________________________________________

Great start to the story! I've ever read. Keep up the great work author...................................................................................

Good for a Avatar fanfiction 8/10 happy for more ....................................................................................................................................