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Ascension of the Worthless (OLD)
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Adonis Lock is an untalented boy. Given to the Green Valley sect by his family, he is faced with constant bullying and harassment by other disciples. One day, while contemplating taking his life he falls asleep, only to be met with his ancestor that gives him a chance to change his life around.
*Author note: This is my first story, so if there is any mistake or something is not good, please tell me in the comments or reviews.
**Also I am doing this as a hobby, so the schedule of uploads may be all over the place plus the chance that I may drop the story.
***Art is made by Yodayo AI art
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-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
4รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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The world feels familiar, but he author does a good job of making the plot easy to understand. Adonis as a protagonist is immediately relatable, which makes his eventual ascension all the more intriguing. Kudos to the author for making an MC we can root for!
The book is great, I am surprised at how there weren't many reviews and comments on this book, the book is just🔥, just a few mistakes which weren't that bad, but even with that I still give this book 8/10
This review was based on the first three chapters as I believe they were the make or break of any story. WRITING QUALITY: It was easy to understand. No unnecessary jargon that would otherwise destroy the immersion if used just for the sake of it. It was straight to the point and the length was just the perfect length for my attention span that wasn't any bigger than that of a goldfish. STABILITY OF UPDATES: I checked the table of content and the author seemed to be updating just fine. I hope he keeps this up though. STORY DEVELOPMENT: Every chapter progressed quite well. While short, they definitely aren't pointless (if you know what I mean) like, just there for the word count. In this story, however, the pacing was just right. Not fast nor too slow though I couldn't say for sure yet for the next chapter because like I said, this review was only based on the first three chaps. CHARACTER DESIGN: I like that the protagonist wasn't a male damsel in distress. I am so tired of that trope. I just hope he doesn't get cocky though just cause he got the legacy from Lagon. WORLD BACKGROUND: Nothing to be said yet for the first three chaps but I am giving 5/5 because, well, support.
This is truly a masterpiece. It is beautifully crafted, the characters are richly developed, and the story unfolds with breathtaking twists and turns. A literary masterpiece that will leave you awestruck and longing for another chapter. A must-read for all book lovers!"