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LV 2

Gardbet

a good read with a fresh take on the system trait, can't wait to see more!

LV 3

sleepingpeacefully

Loved the book so far, writing and grammar are good so looking forward for more chapters. Keep it up.

LV 1

Arison_Tshim

Really good story with a system trait which is very rare and not generic which I like and hop to see how far this story goes. Update stability can be worked on though.

LV 3

Akemi_Kyoshi

I like the world setting and the amount of detail put into the story so far. The writing is also great! Too bad its only four chapters but I feel this story has potential! Keep it up!

LV 1

Arison_T

With great hope and "focus" I can somewhat see this becoming a really great story in the future, so I hope that the update stability will not be a great issue.