An Extra's Life in DxD

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aman10

1. It’ s plainly idiotic to be human in dxd world it’s like mc has 0 brain cells , why would someone want to be human in gods , angel , devil world just because he has some attachment that’s the lamest excuse I see 2. Everything about mc is mediocre according to author but he can beat experienced vactian or whatever they are it’s make no sense 3. implementing magic circuits in dxd 😟 4. Don’ t take it to heart And sorry for bad grammar Thank you have a nice day

LV 13

equinotic

writing is whatever, but the real gut punch is when the MC refuses to interact with anyone from canon and any future canon events. he also decides to instead develop some random abilities that just cover his bases, but nothing to really further help support his unique mystic eyes. fighting style is all over the place with trying to be kirei, shiki, and using any magic possible. most annoying part was his reaction to Asia being excommunicated was "im sad, but canon can't be changed" only because he doesn't want to get involved. reality is: he doesn't care at all, as he literally only took her out to explore Vatican City after 5 years of being "her friend." just another wack DxD story.

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ubietobi

Story has a good start. Human is not necessarily a bad starting choice. It´s not, like the other races are very helpful as soon as the ExE arc begins. With his ability he has more chances to survive than ultimate class beings

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SlowWittedSong

it's excellent that you decided to write about the man's five points for it. The plot is still developing, but it's still quite interesting to watch the adventure of Messrs. can you add more scenes where he complains and comments on how he is unhappy that he is being brought closer to the cast from the canon and more Asia please. Ps I think that the choice of eyes of perception of death is not the best for this world. PPS slow down the pace for a bit and give more chemistry between the characters otherwise you just throw the characters in so they just stand on the sidelines.

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Pocketp

It is a very good story with at least character development, not doing it instantly op but with the possibility of being so and at a fair speed with which the plot is going to start

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Alpha_Driver

I think writing about a human mc is a good idea. The writing can be improved a bit but it's fine so far. Keep up the good work! ...........

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Tristan_Arkwright

Thanks for reading my first fanfiction story. Please don’t forget to write comments and reviews to express your thoughts. I would immensely it if you pointed out the faults and provide some criticism or even suggest future events in the story. I know choosing a human mc in dxd is something done in very few fanfics since it’s a very stupid choice. But I really wanted explore more of the human side of things since the actual series only touched upon such topics. Still I appreciate the support. Thanks for reading!!

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batman3251

Finally a dxd fanfic with human mc. Story is also good. Plz dont drop[img=update].............................................................................

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Sippaista_Datta

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Leon_Morreti

this has good potential and make mc join the Hero Faction would be cool