/ Book&Literature / A Muggleborn Serpent. [Rewriting]
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The title may give you the hint, Read and enjoy. This story will start from 1963 (5 years before the Marauders enters Hogwarts)
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Story was great until the The mc girl got the Cruciatus curse and then the story went downhill. he went to grindlewald to for help and then instead of the mc getting hos legacy she will. he beat belletrix early in the novel and was shown to be wayyyyy ahead of everyone but later in the novel he gets super nerfed lol honestly the story was a 5/5 before the girl got messed up. Its a remove from the lirbrary for me now
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sabe, depois de ler tantas e tantas historias sore o mesmo assunto, como por exemplo, fan fic de anime, filmes, historias de cultivadores que nascem no buraco mais escuro do universo e se tornam imortais, você começa a ver muitas semelhanças, poucas historias originais, já não tem mais aquela coisa que te prende, é divertido a maior parte do tempo, mas é isso, é um passa tempo, mas tem historias como essa, que te te prendem, como se você estivesse hipnotizado, você lê e você ri, você chora, se irrita, se preocupa, e as vezes ate esquece que é só uma historia, é quase como se você estivesse lá, vendo com seus próprios olhos, sentindo a emoção do personagem quase como se fosse sua. eu sei eu sei, é apenas uma fan fic, não é um super livro elaborado feito por um escritor genial, mas eu acho o escritor incrível, ele consegue transmitir o sentimento, ele te provoca fazendo você querer ver o próximo capitulo porque você não faz ideia do que vai acontecer. e isso tudo junto cria uma coisa dentro de você, um sentimento de satisfação em poder ler essa historia. Eu leio muitas historias, muito mesmo, todos os dias, e a maioria eu não me importo, leio por ler, eu gosto de passar meu tempo de lazer assim, mas eu realmente ficaria triste se eu não visse o fim dessa historia, eu acho que eu mesmo mandaria uma mensagem para o escritor pedindo permissão e terminaria eu mesmo com o melhor final que eu poderia imaginar, de incontáveis historias que eu já li, aqui e em outros sites, outros meios, essa é a segunda ou terceira vez que escrevo uma revisão, só fasco por que eu genuinamente gostei da historia. acho que depois que terminar vou fazer uma copia impressa só pra ter certeza que não vou esquecer. e você escritor, se estiver lendo isso, você é incrível! e espero de coração que você continue com esse trabalho. eu seria uma pessoa mais feliz se eu pudesse ter o prazer e o privilegio de ver o final dessa historia.
One of the best fan fics I've read so far keep up the good work Not like other **** stains the call fanfics where M.C IS A F*****MARRY SUE WITH A OP SYSTEM AND SHIT
Writing Quality- Very good, barely any mistakes. Stability of Updates- Perfect. Story Development- Barely any plot holes, and story plot is very good. Character Design- Amazing, you can see him progress a lot. World Background- It's Harry Potter. Barely any plot holes. And the story concept is intriguing. Also author is not afraid to make to make it AU.
incrível, simplesmente incrível, você sabe o que é começar a ler o capitulo com frio na barriga e expectativa no auge por não fazer ideia do que vai acontecer? não é aquelas historias que por mais que a pessoa tente modificar e deixar mais original você meio que já sabe o que vai acontecer, mas essa, me sinto como quando assisti game of thrones pela primeira vez sem ideia nenhuma do que vai acontecer ou o próximo que vai morrer, esse escritor devia ganhar um premio!!!! eu tenho vontade de um dia escrever uma historia fan fic de harry potter, se um dia eu conseguir fazer metade do esse autor minha vida terá valido a pena.
So good. Author I am really liking the chapters. Cant wait to read more. So good. Author I am really liking the chapters. Cant wait to read more.
Nice story overall. Though it seems there's a lack in proper punctuation... Dear Author-san, please stop using so many commas. Please. 😔😔😔
This is a great story! I love the way things are so realistic instead of having an omnipotent 300IQ mc that always took the right step and never suffers properly(not that I really hate it but it's getting boring). I'd love to see how this will end, hopefully it ends in a good way instead of our mc dying in some ditch. I'm looking forward to new chapters, keep up the good work author!
beautiful heartwarming just needed a happy ending second coming of Titanic 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
its one of the greatest fan_fic of harry potter series. i like the fact that Mc is not Overpowerd before he even start the school. it has a natural fkow and i know author has all figure it out how the story will end.
Really good story which stalls around the middle part due to a little slice of life. Author does a good job at crushing your dreams about a character :D
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I recommend fiction as the characters are well described and the protagonist is not omnipotent. Other than that, this fiction is really well written. It has major flaws. 1) The best chapters were the non-canon ones. In short, the protagonist's school years. The first two canon years are very good and from the third year it starts to get worse. 2) Voldemort has a son.............................................................................. 3) I'm glad the protagonist doesn't solve every situation, but lately he's not doing anything. Now the protagonists are the children! 4) Dumbledore is not Dumbledore. His behavior is too different from the real character, at least in the last few chapters.
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Great cliche breaker. Could you perhaps give poor Blair a missus? ... ... ... ... ... ...
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Great story! I love the fact that mc is following in the footsteps of Voldemort! Perhaps mc will be more successful than he ever was with his flawed ideology. Perhaps mc as a muggle-born could create his own organisation like Grindelwald of 'wizard superiority' or something like that which would stop nonsensical wizard racism towards each other and look at future muggle threat or something. It would be kinda boring and sad if mc suddenly becomes goody 2 shoes or a muggle lover. I mean in modern times a single smartphone video of wizards could expose their whole world.