A Mercenary waking up as Sirius Black(HP SI) (Harry Potter)

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chance_isaac

Author ruins the story immediately by making hogwarts start at 18. Then he just has sirius do rituals that apparently no one else ever did, just so he could be the male fantasy. “Adonis” appearance super soldier with enhanced “stamina”. Then another to make him only under dumbles and voldy in terms of magical ability. Just lazy writing for a power fantasy harem. The lemons was written well tho.

LV 4

Miki_Marlo75

so far the best Sirius black story on this page is developing well it focuses on the mc not like others that go straight to Harry after one chapter and leave the mc aside almost at the beginning of the story

LV 11

SacredSilence

Overall I found it boring. Sirius method to gaining power was simplistic and cliche, and the logic behind explanations is lacking. The story was bland and everything came to Sirius very easily, so far there was no struggle.

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reaper_of_lewdsect

so will rise potter have to deal with the dursleys till she's 18 I'm confused based on your synopsis

LV 14

Emperio

the story is incredible so far and I expect a lot from it given the current quality <3 ( google translat sorry for my english ) good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 13

Angry_Reviewer

the story is boring, slow and full of all sorts of ridiculous made up cliche nonsense, just to railroad the plot.

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Ray_02

Update please , you're killing me with anticipation.

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Darkiling

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Sanchos_sboba

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Logi_cal

Just take these five stars author ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Ray_02

amazing, cant wait for more, update faster though.

LV 1

Darkiling

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Sheptshept

Voy a ser sincero es un asco de fanfic la historia no tiene sentido en muchas maneras da cringe en todos los capítulos no es que sea mala historia es que está mal narrada con muchos pero muchos agujeros en la historia y para cualquiera que diga que no tengo razón y bla bla bla leí hasta el capítulo 25 y aún no se pone buena lamento haber desperdiciado tiempo leer esto y si eres nuevo y quieres una reseña buena la mía no lo es pero algo cuenta aunque no creo que dure mucho ya que algunos autores borran o denuncian reseñas cómo estás para que no les afecte en el futuro y si se que el autor es nuevo y bla bla bla o eso dice pero la verdad es que no nos importa ya que está historia está reescritaaa

LV 15

GldnApplImortality

FINALLY!!!!!! A FF where Bellatrix gets the D! Bellatrix is Bae, then comes fleur, then luna. But most of all its a good read. props to you author for dicking down Bellatrix. GOD finally. I was tired of all the lovegood and Hermione ships. need more Bellatrix and Fleur.

LV 11

Youknowme

I love it Fsyteshfdsjgfdgkhckhgxgjrdyktfkfjgrdhutfkhfdjgrduhrdutedhrushffjhgcjhgckhgfrdkgfjhgduhrftihfhurdyittifuhtfjhfbtkfjhgfhkgfjhrejgrdhtifkjhgd

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Darkiling

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Adriana7885

Uhm his rise to power is cliche but it was good writing??

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DaoistjmtGvj

It's good from what I've read so far but there's a lot of spelling errors. To errors when it comes to Sirius's animagus form that is a dog not a Grimm. Also family tree errors Bellatrix, Narcissa, and Andromeda are his cousins not his sisters.

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Darkiling

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