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I still haven't read it yet and I totally didn't click on this novel due to the cover pic.
Welcome, dear readers. Nothing much to say for now, except that this will be a fun and interesting journey, and I employ everyone to join in. Asks any questions under this, I'll answer all to the best of my ability.
I did find interesting and plan to continue reading. Overall it's okay, it's a light read, lack some depth. At moment it has some problems, the story lacks good build-ups/development, seens too smooth sailing at moment, the MC has some dificulties at start, but it's resolved very soon and basically on their own, the MC seens very naive, the girls also. I think it lacks more conflict, more factions within the goblin tribe and more malice towards the MC in general, I would say that definetely needs to expand on the goblin culture, like how they live, what they believe, what events/celebrations they do and how they are, what they admire or dislike, even the goals of the female tribe, questions like they kidnap men the same way the male goblins do with females? At moment it's too superficial explained. spoiler* I think the decision to make the MC the chief of the tribe was very bad, it was too rushed in my opinion, it lacked a proper buil-up for that. The tribe was too accepting of this, it lacked more conflict here and the factions that I mentioned earlier. Also it was less believable, why a stranger with different race, culture, faith or lack off it, and with a suspicious background be choosen to lead the tribe... I think it could happen, with time and overcoming opposition, but not like written here. They want his knowledged, but they could obtain it with other ways or with more malicious means, so why would they surrender their power and authority? It would make more sense if he started as an advisor for the goblin chief/queen or maybe he could be accepted as chief with the basis in some god or something, like the MC being their apostole or envoy... It would make more beliavable spoiler* On character development of the girls, at moment Mira, Zarra and the balcksmith are okay, Rynne is also okay. I don't like Lia, she seens to become too close to the MC right of the bat, even like they already know each other, all they girls sort have this inexplicable closeness, but on Lia it's worst, and she seens very bland now, even more because she was the previous chief. I think it needs more development on how the MC and the girls evolve their relationship. Some thoughts on the future development of the story: concerned on how the MC will make his goblin kingdom, it will have more conflict and opposition or they will just accept it like him being the chief of the tribe? The MC seens to already be thinking on have contact or conflict with other races like beastfolk or humans, but it's seens crazy because he is on pile of sand now, very weak position to be. How they will survive the humans, more inteligent and malicious than their current enemies? How the MC will deal with betrayals and the polictics of his goblin/monster kingdom? Remembering he doesn't have no legitimacy, just a human crowing over monsters. I wish he could develop more before future conflicts. I will keep reading like I said, cheering for the story. OBS: English is not my primary language, so sorry if the review is poorly written.
I still haven't read it yet and I totally didn't click on this novel due to the cover pic.
Welcome, dear readers. Nothing much to say for now, except that this will be a fun and interesting journey, and I employ everyone to join in. Asks any questions under this, I'll answer all to the best of my ability.
I did find interesting and plan to continue reading. Overall it's okay, it's a light read, lack some depth. At moment it has some problems, the story lacks good build-ups/development, seens too smooth sailing at moment, the MC has some dificulties at start, but it's resolved very soon and basically on their own, the MC seens very naive, the girls also. I think it lacks more conflict, more factions within the goblin tribe and more malice towards the MC in general, I would say that definetely needs to expand on the goblin culture, like how they live, what they believe, what events/celebrations they do and how they are, what they admire or dislike, even the goals of the female tribe, questions like they kidnap men the same way the male goblins do with females? At moment it's too superficial explained. spoiler* I think the decision to make the MC the chief of the tribe was very bad, it was too rushed in my opinion, it lacked a proper buil-up for that. The tribe was too accepting of this, it lacked more conflict here and the factions that I mentioned earlier. Also it was less believable, why a stranger with different race, culture, faith or lack off it, and with a suspicious background be choosen to lead the tribe... I think it could happen, with time and overcoming opposition, but not like written here. They want his knowledged, but they could obtain it with other ways or with more malicious means, so why would they surrender their power and authority? It would make more sense if he started as an advisor for the goblin chief/queen or maybe he could be accepted as chief with the basis in some god or something, like the MC being their apostole or envoy... It would make more beliavable spoiler* On character development of the girls, at moment Mira, Zarra and the balcksmith are okay, Rynne is also okay. I don't like Lia, she seens to become too close to the MC right of the bat, even like they already know each other, all they girls sort have this inexplicable closeness, but on Lia it's worst, and she seens very bland now, even more because she was the previous chief. I think it needs more development on how the MC and the girls evolve their relationship. Some thoughts on the future development of the story: concerned on how the MC will make his goblin kingdom, it will have more conflict and opposition or they will just accept it like him being the chief of the tribe? The MC seens to already be thinking on have contact or conflict with other races like beastfolk or humans, but it's seens crazy because he is on pile of sand now, very weak position to be. How they will survive the humans, more inteligent and malicious than their current enemies? How the MC will deal with betrayals and the polictics of his goblin/monster kingdom? Remembering he doesn't have no legitimacy, just a human crowing over monsters. I wish he could develop more before future conflicts. I will keep reading like I said, cheering for the story. OBS: English is not my primary language, so sorry if the review is poorly written.