Reviews of System of the Last Dawn by L5D - Webnovel

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L5D
LV 2 Badge

Author here, ask me any questions about this story, and "ll answer the best I can without spoiling!

17d
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LJW_LXY

Nice and interesting 😀😀😀! The plot is interesting.

14d
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Runao
LV 2 Badge

write it in early chapter. it is a good read. al hail the system. :v the writing is short for me, but it is also good because words are compact and don't stretch.

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15d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Jack_D_Ellwyn

Alright, I've attempted a zombie story before and this is quite intriguing. Solo Levelling x Zombie Apocalypse, I'm eager to see more. Some writing tips though, don't be afraid to go all in on the gore. It is a zombie story after all. It need to shock and disgust. Add a little more description to the world, remember the 5 sense rule. Other than that, I'd like to see more.

15d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
raidou_
LV 11 Badge

A zombie apocalypse with a system integration? Sounds incredibly promising! I’m definitely looking forward to diving into this one—it’s bound to be an exciting ride!

15d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Primordial001

wow zombie outbreak novel. zombie king zombie lord. can't wait to see how the story unfold 👍😎. keep up author.

16d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Aurimas_Pazikas

Very promising story—the first chapter had me hooked! I need more! For the love of god, please give me more chapters!

16d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Pirate_Hunter_Zoro_5104

It's-an intriguing story with we ll written characters. I highly recommend it.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Daoist3GDVgn

good first chapter can't wait for more..

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Gon_Freecss_0488

Good first chapter. I hope that the author doesn't mess it up.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Killua_2906

Good novel has a lot of potential.......

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Abd4545_Sss

It's great so far! 1 highly recommend it.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Anime_9603

It's great so far! Can't wait to see what happens next.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
ad_0490

Interesting plot, nice world setting and perfect writing by the author. I recommend this novel, check it out

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Tips
LV 2 Badge

A very good book, intriguing, well written and beautifully described characters.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Mooden_Mooden

Really good read. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
myaccount

It's an intriguing story with well written characters. Can't wait to see what happens next

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Ld_3422

Next chapter please. Nice story with interesting characters

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
L5D
LV 2 Badge

Author here, ask me any questions about this story, and "ll answer the best I can without spoiling!

17d
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
LJW_LXY

Nice and interesting 😀😀😀! The plot is interesting.

14d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Runao
LV 2 Badge

write it in early chapter. it is a good read. al hail the system. :v the writing is short for me, but it is also good because words are compact and don't stretch.

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15d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Jack_D_Ellwyn

Alright, I've attempted a zombie story before and this is quite intriguing. Solo Levelling x Zombie Apocalypse, I'm eager to see more. Some writing tips though, don't be afraid to go all in on the gore. It is a zombie story after all. It need to shock and disgust. Add a little more description to the world, remember the 5 sense rule. Other than that, I'd like to see more.

15d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
raidou_
LV 11 Badge

A zombie apocalypse with a system integration? Sounds incredibly promising! I’m definitely looking forward to diving into this one—it’s bound to be an exciting ride!

15d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Primordial001

wow zombie outbreak novel. zombie king zombie lord. can't wait to see how the story unfold 👍😎. keep up author.

16d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Aurimas_Pazikas

Very promising story—the first chapter had me hooked! I need more! For the love of god, please give me more chapters!

16d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Pirate_Hunter_Zoro_5104

It's-an intriguing story with we ll written characters. I highly recommend it.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Daoist3GDVgn

good first chapter can't wait for more..

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Gon_Freecss_0488

Good first chapter. I hope that the author doesn't mess it up.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Killua_2906

Good novel has a lot of potential.......

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Abd4545_Sss

It's great so far! 1 highly recommend it.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Anime_9603

It's great so far! Can't wait to see what happens next.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
ad_0490

Interesting plot, nice world setting and perfect writing by the author. I recommend this novel, check it out

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Tips
LV 2 Badge

A very good book, intriguing, well written and beautifully described characters.

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Mooden_Mooden

Really good read. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
myaccount

It's an intriguing story with well written characters. Can't wait to see what happens next

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Ld_3422

Next chapter please. Nice story with interesting characters

17d
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ