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An excellent smut fanfiction. Recommended. The quality is good. The author makes the effort to be original. The smut are many and well written, it's appreciable. No real drama, it's a 'feel good' fanfic and it's a change from all the angst and hurt of so many Tvd fanfic x) The updates are frequent and the word length is consistent and good.
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Bro please don’t drop this fanfic cause if the haters. If you truly couldn’t muster the passion for it that’s understandable but. I enjoy the plot and smut. Please keep it going.
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Awesome story the only way it could be better is if the mc impregnates his girls with daughters that somehow get aged up to breeding age for the mcs harem
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Interesting use of the source material. I enjoy OP protags so that already + 5 points right there. Add in that the smut scenes portrayed so far are pretty got that Ms another + 6. Making it an 11 outta 10 for how good I think this fanfic is. Seriously try it out it’s pretty good.
More of this please. Wanted something like this for a while and never could find it. Keep up good work.
love the story qetsiyah , Dahlia ,bonnie and Elena should a part of his harem.
I hope your love interest doesn't involve Elena as I hope to read this and support this all the way but I'm a loyal Delena fan so please 💕 consider this as there many beautiful woman in TVDU so please 🥺 spare Elena
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I sincerely hope this continues to the end to see what happens and I hope to see how Elena becomes part of his pack of women
Good Muito bom os capítulos mas ainda quero saber quem envio ele para o passado e como ele cresceu de um bebe para adolescente num piscar dr olhos
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SUPER BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=mise à jour][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander]
good book so far cant wait to see where you go with it hope atleast 500 chapters (: ..........................................................................
Everything except updating stability is 5 stars, though that did increase now too. Just gotta say I know barely anything about the whole universe of this. Watched like two seasons of Vampire Diaries. Nothing of the other stuff I cant even name, Originals or Immortals? Something like that and I still love this story and I want to read more of it, fascinating how a fanfic of something is much more interesting to me than the original stuff. Please keep up the good work! And don’t listen to idiots who don’t get that plot is not the focus of this story, do whatever you wanna do!
An excellent smut fanfiction. Recommended. The quality is good. The author makes the effort to be original. The smut are many and well written, it's appreciable. No real drama, it's a 'feel good' fanfic and it's a change from all the angst and hurt of so many Tvd fanfic x) The updates are frequent and the word length is consistent and good.
[img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Bro please don’t drop this fanfic cause if the haters. If you truly couldn’t muster the passion for it that’s understandable but. I enjoy the plot and smut. Please keep it going.
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Awesome story the only way it could be better is if the mc impregnates his girls with daughters that somehow get aged up to breeding age for the mcs harem
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Interesting use of the source material. I enjoy OP protags so that already + 5 points right there. Add in that the smut scenes portrayed so far are pretty got that Ms another + 6. Making it an 11 outta 10 for how good I think this fanfic is. Seriously try it out it’s pretty good.
More of this please. Wanted something like this for a while and never could find it. Keep up good work.
love the story qetsiyah , Dahlia ,bonnie and Elena should a part of his harem.
I hope your love interest doesn't involve Elena as I hope to read this and support this all the way but I'm a loyal Delena fan so please 💕 consider this as there many beautiful woman in TVDU so please 🥺 spare Elena
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's okay, not good and not bad, just good. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I sincerely hope this continues to the end to see what happens and I hope to see how Elena becomes part of his pack of women
Good Muito bom os capítulos mas ainda quero saber quem envio ele para o passado e como ele cresceu de um bebe para adolescente num piscar dr olhos
Great so far. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
SUPER BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=mise à jour][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander]
good book so far cant wait to see where you go with it hope atleast 500 chapters (: ..........................................................................
Everything except updating stability is 5 stars, though that did increase now too. Just gotta say I know barely anything about the whole universe of this. Watched like two seasons of Vampire Diaries. Nothing of the other stuff I cant even name, Originals or Immortals? Something like that and I still love this story and I want to read more of it, fascinating how a fanfic of something is much more interesting to me than the original stuff. Please keep up the good work! And don’t listen to idiots who don’t get that plot is not the focus of this story, do whatever you wanna do!