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i wonder why so much hate for this fic, i mean it's perfect, so much persons want that the mc would be undetectable or a super happy history. Like come on they are ninjas, obvious a suddenly weeb in a kid's body would be obvious of something suspicious and i think that the story goes without saying in a perfect way and the writing it's also made perfect 10/10 for me.
It's pretty much just a torture fic for the first 50 chapters and then 20 chapters of nothing but yapping and occasional killing after he escapes. Dosent deserve any more than 2 stars
i forced myself to finish this boring story full of nonsense and needless and useless explanations and unrealistic and baseless speculations as a form of punishment for starting reading it
IMHO this is a good reading. So refreshing after all these system hyped naruto fanfics. Go go, let's destroy konoha! ++++++++++++++++++++++++
Im a very patient guy, but this book just tests the fuck out of me. I'm truly hollowed out after reading 30+ chapters. I wouldn't suggest this book to anyone. I know this is a translation, despite the fact that the author who took the burden of translating it can try to edit it to be faster, but no, and I can't say anything about that, totally his choice. ultimately a very unnecessarily long-dragging story that takes forever to say anything.
Author, delete similar 1-star comments. These are either ignorant people used to reading machine-translated stories where the protagonist is overpowered and omniscient, or people who don't want your work to reach the top. For those who haven't read it yet and are checking the comments to decide if it's worth reading: It definitely is. The world is well-built, and the relationships between the characters are well explained. The supernatural element in the form of chakra is described exceptionally well. All the techniques and the logic behind them that the protagonist learns always have a proper origin, rather than being granted by some "golden finger" pulled out of thin air like in some Chinese stories. The characters are well-developed, and the text is enjoyable to read. Regarding the excessive cruelty, I can only say that it's quite realistic. In a world of endless war, betrayal, and violence, it's hard to imagine kind-hearted people willing to help you. Everyone pursues their own goals or desires. Hiruzen is no exception here; he's portrayed very realistically. There’s none of that typical dynamic between Hiruzen and Danzo found in 99% of fanfics: "I’m the Hokage!" "You’ll regret this!" Sometimes characters are depicted a bit naively, such as Mito when she trusted Hiruzen, but overall, I’m satisfied and eagerly awaiting new chapters.
Очень круто мне понравилось всё Буду ждать продолжения надеюсь вы не забросили эту работу я заметила что люди пишут что это скучно но для таких людей как я это просто шедевр [img=Smitten]
61 chapters of nothing waste of time.......................................................................................................
This story should be called "Naruto: Nothing Happens" read up to chapter 30, the story can be summed up by "random speculation and coincidences forced the MC to be captured and tortured by the third hokage for 20+ chapters and he went crazy", bare minimum useage of the source material and the characters are either dumb or needlessly evil
This is a great story 👍👍🙏👌...............................................................................................................
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so, if you want a irritating, headache and feel like idiot then you can read this. its not a go with the flow read. the mc yet to get a revenge and i am at chapter 47. the author should have some kind of fetish to write an arc with torture.
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i read the mtl till 300/600 chapters by now. You are not here for an OP mc story. this is a JOURNEY. its a genius mc who was dealt a very bad hand at start. it starts with mc being so lost that he got captured, then he gets enough power to only run away, then he gets enough power to be able to run from 3rd thunderkage after opening 8 gates, then he gets enough power to be able to fight all 5 kage to standstill. then he gets power to fight old dying madara. everytime, he loses or wins, mc is learning, learning new tricks, upgrading old tricks. focus is revenge for sure but now he has started to look forward to more. this is an absolute banger as per me. original - 木叶，开局被四代火影举报
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If there was a lower rating I would have given it. Literally whoever wants to read this nonsense needs to turn off all their brain cells since whoever wrote this novel doesn't know anything about Naruto. Just imagine that Minato who is six years old is the best chakra sensor and can feel that the chakra changes and the story only revolves around the cruelty of Danzo and the Hokage and the torture of the main character.
LAME BORING NOT ABOUT MC. This is more about the imoral crimes of 3rd hokage and danzo then anything else. MC is weak and usless 40+ chapter he still hasnt escaped from root. This is not an OVERPOWERED MC story.
-20* concept is good but 40 chapters and the story hasn't even started yet... 8 or so chapters on the mc.. 32 on insignificant ppl.. waste of a time.
It is a really nice concept that differences and changes can be noticed immediately in a ninja village, but such stupid speculations are really ridiculous. It is ridiculous to assume that his body has been taken over by a ninja who has perfected his soul transformation technique because he has no chakra in his hair. For example, he could be wearing a wig.d?? Or he may have awakened a special Kekkai genkai. Ninjas don't speculate without the necessary intelligence. And he doesn't act as if he really does. This fiction is definitely Chinese fiction because he turned a good concept into shit by writing it with disgusting stupidity.
It's a waste that could've been silver, at least . Author just took pleasure in writing torture scenes and barely made any progress from chapter 10 to chapter 40. Had potential, now- not worth it.
I felt lied to by reviews. The story wanders away for the mc in increasingly stupid ways then hyper focuses on conversations that have nothing to do with mc ( I think it’s to remind us it’s a Naruto fic). Anyways I found myself speed scrolling through chapters to find anything with mc and was dissatisfied.
Nothing is happening no plot is developing it’s just useless whining and nothing happens
De los peores fanfic de Naruto que le leído, una basura china con nombres asquerosos y sin sentido, no lo recomiendo aléjese de esta obra y no pierdan su tiempo!!
i read upto chapter 35.too boring ,too depressing ,mc doesn't take any action , story is all about cruelty of hiruzen and danzo theres's no plot development . i am dropping it.
many dialogs are empty, but gentlemen this is a translation of chingchong and for chinchong garbage it is actually good and for 26 chapters I saw only 1 time racism. The chapters are short but a day comes out a couple of times and I repeat for chingchong this is a good book
I don't want to spoil it for people who want to read this but I will say IMO that all the good parts of this novel has already passed. I haven't read the entire novel but I read enough to feel like its super monotonous.
This was fking hard read. The author just writes and writes about nothing. MC was kept by the hokage and then danzo for about 50 chapters. And at chapter 90 he is still trying to flee after his escape. (Only few days into his escape) This is not the problem of being slow, the author just speculates 10000 things every chapter, and use a whole chapter to explain obvious stuff.
i wonder why so much hate for this fic, i mean it's perfect, so much persons want that the mc would be undetectable or a super happy history. Like come on they are ninjas, obvious a suddenly weeb in a kid's body would be obvious of something suspicious and i think that the story goes without saying in a perfect way and the writing it's also made perfect 10/10 for me.
It's pretty much just a torture fic for the first 50 chapters and then 20 chapters of nothing but yapping and occasional killing after he escapes. Dosent deserve any more than 2 stars
i forced myself to finish this boring story full of nonsense and needless and useless explanations and unrealistic and baseless speculations as a form of punishment for starting reading it
IMHO this is a good reading. So refreshing after all these system hyped naruto fanfics. Go go, let's destroy konoha! ++++++++++++++++++++++++
Im a very patient guy, but this book just tests the fuck out of me. I'm truly hollowed out after reading 30+ chapters. I wouldn't suggest this book to anyone. I know this is a translation, despite the fact that the author who took the burden of translating it can try to edit it to be faster, but no, and I can't say anything about that, totally his choice. ultimately a very unnecessarily long-dragging story that takes forever to say anything.
Author, delete similar 1-star comments. These are either ignorant people used to reading machine-translated stories where the protagonist is overpowered and omniscient, or people who don't want your work to reach the top. For those who haven't read it yet and are checking the comments to decide if it's worth reading: It definitely is. The world is well-built, and the relationships between the characters are well explained. The supernatural element in the form of chakra is described exceptionally well. All the techniques and the logic behind them that the protagonist learns always have a proper origin, rather than being granted by some "golden finger" pulled out of thin air like in some Chinese stories. The characters are well-developed, and the text is enjoyable to read. Regarding the excessive cruelty, I can only say that it's quite realistic. In a world of endless war, betrayal, and violence, it's hard to imagine kind-hearted people willing to help you. Everyone pursues their own goals or desires. Hiruzen is no exception here; he's portrayed very realistically. There’s none of that typical dynamic between Hiruzen and Danzo found in 99% of fanfics: "I’m the Hokage!" "You’ll regret this!" Sometimes characters are depicted a bit naively, such as Mito when she trusted Hiruzen, but overall, I’m satisfied and eagerly awaiting new chapters.
Очень круто мне понравилось всё Буду ждать продолжения надеюсь вы не забросили эту работу я заметила что люди пишут что это скучно но для таких людей как я это просто шедевр [img=Smitten]
61 chapters of nothing waste of time.......................................................................................................
This story should be called "Naruto: Nothing Happens" read up to chapter 30, the story can be summed up by "random speculation and coincidences forced the MC to be captured and tortured by the third hokage for 20+ chapters and he went crazy", bare minimum useage of the source material and the characters are either dumb or needlessly evil
This is a great story 👍👍🙏👌...............................................................................................................
Lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo
Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................Nice...................
[img=Smitten][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
so, if you want a irritating, headache and feel like idiot then you can read this. its not a go with the flow read. the mc yet to get a revenge and i am at chapter 47. the author should have some kind of fetish to write an arc with torture.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ i read the mtl till 300/600 chapters by now. You are not here for an OP mc story. this is a JOURNEY. its a genius mc who was dealt a very bad hand at start. it starts with mc being so lost that he got captured, then he gets enough power to only run away, then he gets enough power to be able to run from 3rd thunderkage after opening 8 gates, then he gets enough power to be able to fight all 5 kage to standstill. then he gets power to fight old dying madara. everytime, he loses or wins, mc is learning, learning new tricks, upgrading old tricks. focus is revenge for sure but now he has started to look forward to more. this is an absolute banger as per me. original - 木叶，开局被四代火影举报
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ If there was a lower rating I would have given it. Literally whoever wants to read this nonsense needs to turn off all their brain cells since whoever wrote this novel doesn't know anything about Naruto. Just imagine that Minato who is six years old is the best chakra sensor and can feel that the chakra changes and the story only revolves around the cruelty of Danzo and the Hokage and the torture of the main character.
LAME BORING NOT ABOUT MC. This is more about the imoral crimes of 3rd hokage and danzo then anything else. MC is weak and usless 40+ chapter he still hasnt escaped from root. This is not an OVERPOWERED MC story.
-20* concept is good but 40 chapters and the story hasn't even started yet... 8 or so chapters on the mc.. 32 on insignificant ppl.. waste of a time.
It is a really nice concept that differences and changes can be noticed immediately in a ninja village, but such stupid speculations are really ridiculous. It is ridiculous to assume that his body has been taken over by a ninja who has perfected his soul transformation technique because he has no chakra in his hair. For example, he could be wearing a wig.d?? Or he may have awakened a special Kekkai genkai. Ninjas don't speculate without the necessary intelligence. And he doesn't act as if he really does. This fiction is definitely Chinese fiction because he turned a good concept into shit by writing it with disgusting stupidity.
It's a waste that could've been silver, at least . Author just took pleasure in writing torture scenes and barely made any progress from chapter 10 to chapter 40. Had potential, now- not worth it.
I felt lied to by reviews. The story wanders away for the mc in increasingly stupid ways then hyper focuses on conversations that have nothing to do with mc ( I think it’s to remind us it’s a Naruto fic). Anyways I found myself speed scrolling through chapters to find anything with mc and was dissatisfied.
Nothing is happening no plot is developing it’s just useless whining and nothing happens
De los peores fanfic de Naruto que le leído, una basura china con nombres asquerosos y sin sentido, no lo recomiendo aléjese de esta obra y no pierdan su tiempo!!
i read upto chapter 35.too boring ,too depressing ,mc doesn't take any action , story is all about cruelty of hiruzen and danzo theres's no plot development . i am dropping it.
many dialogs are empty, but gentlemen this is a translation of chingchong and for chinchong garbage it is actually good and for 26 chapters I saw only 1 time racism. The chapters are short but a day comes out a couple of times and I repeat for chingchong this is a good book
I don't want to spoil it for people who want to read this but I will say IMO that all the good parts of this novel has already passed. I haven't read the entire novel but I read enough to feel like its super monotonous.
This was fking hard read. The author just writes and writes about nothing. MC was kept by the hokage and then danzo for about 50 chapters. And at chapter 90 he is still trying to flee after his escape. (Only few days into his escape) This is not the problem of being slow, the author just speculates 10000 things every chapter, and use a whole chapter to explain obvious stuff.