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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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I'm loving it so far mate keep up the great work mate cause when this first came up in the Omake I really did want to see a story come out of it and load and behold it did so I'm happy
Well you deserve a hell lot praise for these long a** chapters. Story is impeccable and the way characters genuinely feel alive is a plus for me.
It’s a side story that takes place at the start of Black Clover, but even though it’s a side story, it’s still one of the best Black Clover fanfics I’ve seen. The updates are frequent, and the chapters are long. There isn’t much to say about character development at the moment because the story started just two days ago and hasn’t had much time to flesh them out. However, if it ends up being as good as the main story, I’ll be satisfied. The writing quality is good, and I haven’t noticed any grammar mistakes, so overall, I’d say it’s worth giving a try.
I don't have much to say when it comes to this story. It will take less of a precedence than the main story, and have a more infrequent update schedule. One thing to note it will be far more canon like, though not a rehash naturally.
Me gustó este omake cuando lo puso en la otra obra y seguro me gustará ahora también .......................,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,
I'm loving it so far mate keep up the great work mate cause when this first came up in the Omake I really did want to see a story come out of it and load and behold it did so I'm happy
Well you deserve a hell lot praise for these long a** chapters. Story is impeccable and the way characters genuinely feel alive is a plus for me.
It’s a side story that takes place at the start of Black Clover, but even though it’s a side story, it’s still one of the best Black Clover fanfics I’ve seen. The updates are frequent, and the chapters are long. There isn’t much to say about character development at the moment because the story started just two days ago and hasn’t had much time to flesh them out. However, if it ends up being as good as the main story, I’ll be satisfied. The writing quality is good, and I haven’t noticed any grammar mistakes, so overall, I’d say it’s worth giving a try.
I don't have much to say when it comes to this story. It will take less of a precedence than the main story, and have a more infrequent update schedule. One thing to note it will be far more canon like, though not a rehash naturally.
Me gustó este omake cuando lo puso en la otra obra y seguro me gustará ahora también .......................,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,