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Полное гавро 50 глав только о том что гг самый слабый и у него постоянно заканчивается чакра. также 50 глав о том что гг постоянно в побеге. в целом фанфик гавно и автор тупой лох.
It is an excellent novel, even if it is a bit of wish fulfillment. A system that is not godlike, but is very good still. Recommend reading when you have nothing more to read and want a novel that u can just read something simple.
A ortografia é ótima, mas esta é a típica fanfic de 'dragão oculto e tigre agachado'. Entendedores entenderão.
boring AF . FIRST FEW CHAPTERS were total waste of time and boring but next chapter were even more boring. it was painful to the ears, dizzying to eye. my mind was blanked out. even p*rn has a good story telling than this. i couldn't get a single impression from MC or system .as a reader i couldn't give a single concern(fk) to his situation. still read close to 20 chapters, it was with my own seer will because I don't want to change the novel and was stuck with it for few hours.
Sorry, boring maç and mid story.Sometimes I thought the story would be exciting but it never happened.These are my personal opinions. Good luck with your story.
This story is amazing, boasting excellent grammar and syntax. Character development is satisfactory, given the MC's past memories. The plot is original, considering its fanfiction origins. However, the incorporation of Chinese names occasionally disrupts my immersion in the narrative. Kudos to the Translator , keep up the great work
A very good novel. But the chapters are not too much. Need to upload more. MC is OP and smart. So I like MC very much. Eagerly waiting for more chapters.
Love the system function, loved the beginning, yeah the mc's name needs changing but who cares? It's nothing major. Definitely gonna stick with it to see where the story goes.
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i like the novel, i always like evolution novels, mc is slowly evolving to be stronger by using his chakra, then slowly evolving to be poison resistant etc... give it a try
The novel is good with few mistakes,but my only problem is the name,can't you just change the name to a Japanese one? i mean a Chinese name in a Japanese one is uncomfortable if it were a Chinese novel it would be good but in a Japanese such as Naruto?
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I really love this novel it is perfect for me it have what I want from my novel system,weak to strong mc , ruthless but kind mc,ok story keep the good work author.
Overall really good novel, can't find many grammar mistakes, it's have really good story and I really like the system it's doesn't have emotion at least not now it's really good keep up the good work author
I liked the system and the character MC Although there are some stupid things he does, it doesn't matter. I give it 4.5 stars, some changes in the plot which I see as stupid but but this is more in nature than staying the same original story despite the presence of MC In it
Полное гавро 50 глав только о том что гг самый слабый и у него постоянно заканчивается чакра. также 50 глав о том что гг постоянно в побеге. в целом фанфик гавно и автор тупой лох.
It is an excellent novel, even if it is a bit of wish fulfillment. A system that is not godlike, but is very good still. Recommend reading when you have nothing more to read and want a novel that u can just read something simple.
A ortografia é ótima, mas esta é a típica fanfic de 'dragão oculto e tigre agachado'. Entendedores entenderão.
boring AF . FIRST FEW CHAPTERS were total waste of time and boring but next chapter were even more boring. it was painful to the ears, dizzying to eye. my mind was blanked out. even p*rn has a good story telling than this. i couldn't get a single impression from MC or system .as a reader i couldn't give a single concern(fk) to his situation. still read close to 20 chapters, it was with my own seer will because I don't want to change the novel and was stuck with it for few hours.
Sorry, boring maç and mid story.Sometimes I thought the story would be exciting but it never happened.These are my personal opinions. Good luck with your story.
This story is amazing, boasting excellent grammar and syntax. Character development is satisfactory, given the MC's past memories. The plot is original, considering its fanfiction origins. However, the incorporation of Chinese names occasionally disrupts my immersion in the narrative. Kudos to the Translator , keep up the great work
A very good novel. But the chapters are not too much. Need to upload more. MC is OP and smart. So I like MC very much. Eagerly waiting for more chapters.
Love the system function, loved the beginning, yeah the mc's name needs changing but who cares? It's nothing major. Definitely gonna stick with it to see where the story goes.
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i like the novel, i always like evolution novels, mc is slowly evolving to be stronger by using his chakra, then slowly evolving to be poison resistant etc... give it a try
The novel is good with few mistakes,but my only problem is the name,can't you just change the name to a Japanese one? i mean a Chinese name in a Japanese one is uncomfortable if it were a Chinese novel it would be good but in a Japanese such as Naruto?
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I really love this novel it is perfect for me it have what I want from my novel system,weak to strong mc , ruthless but kind mc,ok story keep the good work author.
Overall really good novel, can't find many grammar mistakes, it's have really good story and I really like the system it's doesn't have emotion at least not now it's really good keep up the good work author
I liked the system and the character MC Although there are some stupid things he does, it doesn't matter. I give it 4.5 stars, some changes in the plot which I see as stupid but but this is more in nature than staying the same original story despite the presence of MC In it