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the guy wrap bandage once and baam, skill created! lvl up! It doesn't make sense when a new skill was learned from doing nothing else but bandaging. He also claims to be a medical ninja despite not being a ninja nor a doctor. This is just so stupid.
Kinda rushed after he beat Iwagakure army + Jinchuriki singlehandedly. He got Sharingan for no reason, became Jinchuriki, and forced betrayal plot. Even though the pacing is really good before this
alright this had a solid start could've been a great novel but author just had to fulfill his pakura and karura fetish and ruin this entire story and make it an abslolute garbage with no stakes and charector development just flimsy idiotic mc moments and nonsensical decision with everyone just praising him like he's hashirama second coming and more importantly they're like mc -10iq others -1000iq it's that bad don't read it it's an absolute garbage novel no hate to you TL you did a perfect job hate is to it's real author
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
the system is kinda bs. power system unclear. character progression too unnatural.
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Top tear Naruto fic!! The characters, the story progression, especially the comedy amidst the somewhat bleak ninja setting of Suna- all are top notch!! Can’t wait for more chapters!!
nice, story about sunagakure. prety cool. its puppet and heal skill . got level system. funy and tranlate is good enough need more chapter to review again maybe after you post 200+[img=faceslap]
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for free... its good maybe? genre : Comedy System Action Grind? Con: its to few, inedmore? Will be coming back! Thank you so much.” Will be coming back! Thank you so much.”
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what this shit. attori Hanzō (服部 半蔵, c. 1542[1] – January 2, 1597) or Second Hanzō, nicknamed Oni no Hanzō (鬼の半蔵, Demon Hanzō),[2] was a famous samurai of the Sengoku era, who served the Tokugawa clan as a general, credited with saving the life of Tokugawa Ieyasu and then helping him to become the ruler of united Japan. He is often a subject of various portrayals in modern popular culture. Hanzō was known as an expert tactician and a master of sword fighting, and was included in cultural sobriquet as one of Tokugawa's 16 divine generals (Tokugawa jūrokushinshō).[3][4][5] He became known as the Second Hanzō. He would later earn the nickname Oni no Hanzō (鬼の半蔵, Demon Hanzō)[2] because of the fearless tactics he displayed in his operations; this moniker also distinguished him from Watanabe Hanzō (Watanabe Moritsuna), who is nicknamed Yari no Hanzō (槍の半蔵, Spear Hanzō).[6]
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thank for you dedication , please upload regulary. done ? can i post it now, how many this world need to post.zzzzzz zzzzzzzz wwhyy its hard to write review
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the guy wrap bandage once and baam, skill created! lvl up! It doesn't make sense when a new skill was learned from doing nothing else but bandaging. He also claims to be a medical ninja despite not being a ninja nor a doctor. This is just so stupid.
Kinda rushed after he beat Iwagakure army + Jinchuriki singlehandedly. He got Sharingan for no reason, became Jinchuriki, and forced betrayal plot. Even though the pacing is really good before this
alright this had a solid start could've been a great novel but author just had to fulfill his pakura and karura fetish and ruin this entire story and make it an abslolute garbage with no stakes and charector development just flimsy idiotic mc moments and nonsensical decision with everyone just praising him like he's hashirama second coming and more importantly they're like mc -10iq others -1000iq it's that bad don't read it it's an absolute garbage novel no hate to you TL you did a perfect job hate is to it's real author
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
the system is kinda bs. power system unclear. character progression too unnatural.
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Top tear Naruto fic!! The characters, the story progression, especially the comedy amidst the somewhat bleak ninja setting of Suna- all are top notch!! Can’t wait for more chapters!!
nice, story about sunagakure. prety cool. its puppet and heal skill . got level system. funy and tranlate is good enough need more chapter to review again maybe after you post 200+[img=faceslap]
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name your patreon name your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreon
for free... its good maybe? genre : Comedy System Action Grind? Con: its to few, inedmore? Will be coming back! Thank you so much.” Will be coming back! Thank you so much.”
“The staff was great. The receptionists were very helpful and answered all our questions. The room was clean and bright, and the room service was always on time. Will be coming back! Thank you so much.”
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ what this shit. attori Hanzō (服部 半蔵, c. 1542[1] – January 2, 1597) or Second Hanzō, nicknamed Oni no Hanzō (鬼の半蔵, Demon Hanzō),[2] was a famous samurai of the Sengoku era, who served the Tokugawa clan as a general, credited with saving the life of Tokugawa Ieyasu and then helping him to become the ruler of united Japan. He is often a subject of various portrayals in modern popular culture. Hanzō was known as an expert tactician and a master of sword fighting, and was included in cultural sobriquet as one of Tokugawa's 16 divine generals (Tokugawa jūrokushinshō).[3][4][5] He became known as the Second Hanzō. He would later earn the nickname Oni no Hanzō (鬼の半蔵, Demon Hanzō)[2] because of the fearless tactics he displayed in his operations; this moniker also distinguished him from Watanabe Hanzō (Watanabe Moritsuna), who is nicknamed Yari no Hanzō (槍の半蔵, Spear Hanzō).[6]
mhnhnhnhmhhmmhhnhmhmhnmhnhmhm mhmhhmnhnhmhhmhnhnmhmhmh I'll be there for you (Like I've been there before) I'll be there for you ('Cause you're there for me too)
lets make joke.. what the name ofour moon, whoever know it , text meeeee i ll give you hassih hassssisssssssssss maybe agkgamgamgalgaglgasalmsg;
wanggagwpwagnpangpangm;alnsgml;amg;lm;agm;lamg;mg;lma;mga;smg;amg;smaslg;mag;lm;algm;algm;aslgml;amg;lamg;lmapsgmiopgjq0iwei0trhq0ithqptpoqtjpoqtjpoqj
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ thank for you dedication , please upload regulary. done ? can i post it now, how many this world need to post.zzzzzz zzzzzzzz wwhyy its hard to write review
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Please don't drop this fanfic, the story's just getting interesting